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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Technology is the key to all problems on earth?

: Technology is the key to all problems on earth? BY895
The 20th century has gone through a time. It is undeniable that technology has changed our lives a lot. Most of these changes have made our lives more comfortable, more comfortable, and better. In my opinion, technology makes the earth more livable. First, the advent of computers and the Internet triggered a revolution in information technology. They will connect many people from all over the world in a variety of ways, such as: email, Facebook, Skype. In addition, they will search and save information, knowledge or news from large data sources that are constantly updated. In addition, following technical events, the machine has been programmed and fully automated. Machines can allow humans to complete all tasks simply, from the best to the most complex, requiring high precision, high labor intensity, or high risk. Such as the production of high-precision products, clicking on the computer or spacecraft to explore the universe to manage and operate the factory. In addition, technological advancements benefit our lives through significant medical advancements. The medical field has successfully used special equipment for bowel transplantation. Many of us who suffer from diseases have a better chance of survival. On the one hand, another alternative to this view is that technology has not improved the earth. They found that computers and machines would affect employment. Furthermore, they assume that environmental pollution is caused by technology. To some extent, this is usually correct to some extent. However, this statement is unreasonable, because machines are irreplaceable. Both humans and technology will make new discoveries and create many new jobs. In addition, alternative energy sources can solve environmental problems. For example, alternative energy, wind energy or clean energy. In short, the benefits of technology outweigh the disadvantages it brings to our lives. I believe that technology makes the earth a better place, so we must apply technology correctly to reduce its shortcomings.
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technology
has
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changed
our
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lives
a lot. Most of these
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changes
have made our
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lives
more comfortable, more comfortable, and better. In my opinion,
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technology
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makes
the earth more livable.

First
, the advent of computers and the Internet triggered a revolution in information
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technology
. They will connect
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many
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people
from all over the world in a variety of ways, such as: email, Facebook, Skype. In
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addition
, they will search and save information, knowledge or news from large data sources that are
constantly
updated.

In
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addition
, following technical
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events
, the
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machine
has
been programmed
and
fully
automated.
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Machines
can
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allow
humans to complete all tasks
simply
, from the best to the most complex, requiring high precision, high labor intensity, or high
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risk
. Such as the production of high-precision products, clicking on the computer or spacecraft to explore the universe to manage and operate the factory. In
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addition
, technological advancements benefit our
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lives
through significant medical advancements. The medical field has
successfully
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used
special equipment for bowel transplantation.
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Many
of us who suffer from diseases have a better chance of survival.

On the one hand, another alternative to this view is that
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technology
has not
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improved
the earth. They found that computers and
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machines
would affect employment.
Furthermore
, they assume that environmental pollution
is caused
by
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technology
. To
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some
extent, this is
usually
correct to
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some
extent.
However
, this statement is unreasonable,
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because
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machines
are irreplaceable. Both humans and
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technology
will
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make
new discoveries and create
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many
new jobs. In
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addition
, alternative energy sources can solve environmental problems.
For example
, alternative energy, wind energy or clean energy.

In short, the benefits of
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technology
outweigh the disadvantages it brings to our
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lives
. I believe that
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technology
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makes
the earth a better place,
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so
we
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must
apply
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technology
correctly
to
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reduce
its shortcomings.
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IELTS essay : Technology is the key to all problems on earth?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
311 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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