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Technology is making communication easier in today's world, but at the expense of personal contact as many people choose to work at home in front of a computer screen. Discuss both views and give your opinion. .

Technology is making communication easier in today's world, but at the expense of personal contact as many people choose to work at home in front of a computer screen. . 7aPrX

These days technology is utilized for easier communication in the whole world but many of the individuals aren't in personal contact as they choose to work in front of desktops and laptop screens at their residence. In my opinion the technology should be used to some extent but not loosing the personal contact with the dearest. Moreover, the development of technology made humankind to communicate each other with in fraction of seconds, browse the information from the internet. For instance, the people communicate, post their pictures, share information through social media namely what's up, facebook, instagram and twitter. Additionally, the other example includes the browsing information from the online services which is excluded from the books, magazines. On the other hand, the demerits of utilizing the technology may leads to health issues and the people lose the face to face interactions with each other and misuse of the social media cause cyber crime. For example, individuals working in front of desktops for long duration causes eye sight, back ache, and other eye related diseases. In addition, these days every individual prefer the internet such as video calling for communicating with others rather than meeting at person which may lead to breaking of the relationships. To conclude, the individuals must be in personal contact with each other rather than spending their time with the desktops or laptops.

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