Owing to the fact that there is a growing trend in the level of obesity in the society, some people believe that the increment in the cost of fatty foods will eradicate the problem. In my opinion, I totally disagree because I believe that there are other factors such as genetic, way of life and nature of work that are also responsible and by all the other factors are addressed, the dilemma will not be resolved.
To begin with, there is a school of thought that believed that if fatness runs in the family, reducing fatty food intake will not curb the situation. However, medical advice has been given to such families to observe regular exercises and to be careful of what they consume. For instance, in a family where grandparents and all the children are obese, they will be put on certain diets which will mainly consist of vegetables.
Another reason to consider is the nature of work an individual does. Research has proven that some work which are sedimentary are major causes of overweight Hence, such employees are advised to take frequent breaks by talking a walk so as to control this. For instance, cashier in a bank sits for a long period due to the nature of work.
In conclusion, even though consumption of fatty foods is one of the major causes of obesity, other factors such as hereditary and work nature are also responsible and until all the factors are taken care of problem will not be resolved. 
Owing to the fact that there is a growing trend in the level of obesity in the society,  
some
  people
 believe that the increment in the cost of fatty foods will eradicate the problem. In my opinion, I  
totally
 disagree  
because
 I believe that there are other  
factors
 such as genetic, way of life and  
nature
 of  
work
 that are  
also
 responsible and by all the other  
factors
  are addressed
, the dilemma will not  
be resolved
.
To  
begin
 with, there is a school of  
thought
 that believed that if fatness runs in the family, reducing fatty food intake will not curb the situation.  
However
, medical advice has been  
given
 to such families to observe regular exercises and to be careful of what they consume.  
For instance
, in a family where grandparents and all the children are obese, they will  
be put
 on certain diets which will  
mainly
 consist of vegetables.
Another reason to consider is the  
nature
 of  
work
 an individual does. Research has proven that  
some
  work
 which are sedimentary are major causes of overweight  
Hence
, such employees  
are advised
 to take frequent breaks by talking a walk  
so as to
 control this.  
For instance
, cashier in a bank sits for a long period due to the  
nature
 of work. 
In conclusion
,  
even though
 consumption of fatty foods is one of the major causes of obesity, other  
factors
 such as hereditary and  
work
  nature
 are  
also
 responsible and until all the  
factors
  are taken
 care of problem will not  
be resolved
.