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Some people think that large sporting international events could cause problems to the hosting country and it is not worth hosting such events. Do you agree or disagree.

Some people think that large sporting international events could cause problems to the hosting country and it is not worth hosting such events. 2bKro
There is a common myth that large sporting international events cause problems for the organisers and it is not worth hosting such events. In this essay, we will try to explore what are the advantages and disadvantages of hosting such events, and base our opinion on whether this myth is true if the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. There are many problems associated with holding such events, the first and foremost is the costs associated with holding such events. The hosting country has to provide boarding and lodging facilities to the guest teams. Similarly, huge number of sporting fans also arrive to watch the event and this may require building new infrastructure such as hotels, roads etc. The influx of the large number of people creates many problems such as traffic problems for the locals, Law and order problems as we seen in recent football tournaments that fans of opposing teams fight with each other inside the stadiums as well as on the roads which creates chaos in the hosting city. The positive impacts or advantages includes a boost in tourism for the hosting country. This helps in bringing foreign exchange as people come from all over the world to attend these events, and they use local services such as hotels, transport and do shopping in the local markets and all of this creates a positive economic impact for the host nation. These events are also seen as a source of pride for the hosting nation and create interest in the youth towards sports. This brief comparison of the pros and cons of holding international sporting events suggests that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and the myth that these events cause problems and these events are not worth hosting in not true. I strongly believe that these events should organise as they have a positive social and economic impact on the host country.
There is a common myth that large sporting international
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cause
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problems
for the
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and it is not worth
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hosting
such
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. In this essay, we will try to explore what are the advantages and disadvantages of
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hosting
such
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, and base our opinion on whether this myth is true if the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

There are
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many
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problems
associated with holding such
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, the
first
and foremost is the costs associated with holding such
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events
. The
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hosting
country
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has to
provide boarding and lodging facilities to the guest teams.
Similarly
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also
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watch
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event
and this may require building new infrastructure such as hotels, roads etc. The influx of the large number of
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people
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creates
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problems
such as traffic
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for the locals, Law and order
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problems
as we
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seen
in recent football tournaments that fans of opposing teams fight with each other inside the stadiums
as well
as on the roads which
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creates
chaos in the
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hosting
city.

The
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impacts or advantages includes a boost in tourism for the
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country. This
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helps
in bringing foreign exchange as
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people
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come
from all over the world to attend these
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events
, and they
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use
local services such as hotels, transport and
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do shopping
in the local markets and all of this
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creates
a
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positive
economic impact for the host nation. These
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are
also
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seen
as a source of pride for the
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hosting
nation and
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create
interest in the youth towards sports.

This brief comparison of the pros and cons of holding international sporting
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events
suggests that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and the myth that these
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cause
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problems
and these
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events
are not worth
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hosting
in not true. I
strongly
believe that these
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events
should
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organise
as they have a
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positive
social and economic impact on the host country.
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IELTS essay Some people think that large sporting international events could cause problems to the hosting country and it is not worth hosting such events.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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