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Technology is beneficial or not

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Undoubtedly, the importance of technology which was always debatable has now become more controversy with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. This controversial has sparked the potential impact over the years. This essay would shed light on valid standpoints in upcoming paragraphs along with a suitable example. Thus will lead to a plausible conclusion. Analyzing the statement and explaining further, there are myriad advantages of this fact. The first and foremost, prominent one is that

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IELTS essay Technology is beneficial or not

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

80 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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