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Technology is beneficial or not

Technology is beneficial or not GlbXj

Undoubtedly, the importance of technology which was always debatable has now become more controversy with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. This controversial has sparked the potential impact over the years. This essay would shed light on valid standpoints in upcoming paragraphs along with a suitable example. Thus will lead to a plausible conclusion. Analyzing the statement and explaining further, there are myriad advantages of this fact. The first and foremost, prominent one is that

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