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In about 300 words, write an essay to express your ideas about the statement “Life skills are very important in our modern life.”

In about 300 words, write an essay to express your ideas about the statement “Life skills are very important in our modern life. ” Ba3X9
The community we live in today requires people who have background experiences rather than academic knowledge owing to its beneficial impact. Hence, there's no reason to overrule the importance of life skills for the following factors below. First and foremost, these crucial skills will boost our confidence and get rid of shyness. In reality, we are green with envy when our friends have a wide relationship circle, but we forget that they’ve undergone many kinds of social skills behind the scenes. For instance, my sister used to tell me that she was so jealous of my private bonds but hardly had she known that I’ve practiced a lot to be confident just for getting along well with others. Another factor is that the more we acknowledge valuable skills, the more enthusiasm we have in any circumstances that we not only participate in more community activities, environmental events but also we can take advantage of our current ability, and enhance it better On the second hand, life skills make us flexible in our own life. Time management, communication, teamwork, etc are several examples that reached us to easy, convenient life. To illustrate, we can think over which duty is important to finish first and order the daily schedule reasonably thanks to time-management skills; starting to take notice of customer’s feedback or what should take action to avoid and solve the conflict during teamwork has probably resulted from cognitive skill. Therefore, we’ll save much more time for ourselves, address the issues effectively and rapidly, and the efforts we’ve tried to prove will be conceded correctly by other people without any negative support. In a nutshell, life skills are sure to be an indispensable part of our nonstop life as the enormous improvement of confidence and flexibility we receive. I’m convinced that there will be more training course and mentorships for young generations to explore yourself and cope with the difficulty beyond in their life.
The community we
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live
in
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today
requires
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people
who have background experiences
rather
than academic knowledge owing to its beneficial impact.
Hence
, there's no reason to overrule the importance of
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life
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skills
for the following factors below.

First
and foremost, these crucial
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skills
will boost our confidence and
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get
rid of shyness. In reality, we are green with envy when our friends have a wide relationship circle,
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but
we forget that they’ve undergone
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many
kinds of social
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skills
behind the scenes.
For instance
, my sister
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used
to
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tell
me that she was
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so
jealous of my private bonds
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but
hardly had she known that I’ve practiced a lot to be confident
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just
for getting along well with others. Another factor is that the more we acknowledge valuable
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skills
, the more enthusiasm we have in any circumstances that we not
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only
participate in more community activities, environmental
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events
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but
also
we can take advantage of our
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current
ability, and enhance it
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better


On the second hand,
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life
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skills
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make
us flexible in our
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own
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life
. Time management, communication, teamwork, etc are several examples that reached us to easy, convenient
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life
. To illustrate, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
over which duty is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to finish
first
and order the daily schedule
reasonably
thanks to time-management
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
; starting to take notice of customer’s feedback or what should take action to avoid and solve the conflict during teamwork has
probably
resulted from cognitive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skill
.
Therefore
, we’ll save much more time for ourselves, address the issues
effectively
and
rapidly
, and the efforts we’ve tried to prove will
be conceded
correctly
by other
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people
without any
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negative
support.

In a nutshell,
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life
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skills
are sure to be an indispensable part of our nonstop
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life
as the enormous improvement of confidence and flexibility we receive. I’m convinced that there will be more training course and
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mentorships
for young generations to explore yourself and cope with the difficulty beyond in their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
.
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IELTS essay In about 300 words, write an essay to express your ideas about the statement “Life skills are very important in our modern life. ”

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
322 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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