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Why are you interested in MUN ? (200 words maximum)

Why are you interested in MUN? (200 words maximum) j5WA1
Recently, I have come across lots of information about CYMUN on the Facebook. The density of shares raised my curiosity about the conference, so I decided to learn more about it. After nearly one week reading up about the MUN, I found it appropriate for students, especially an English-major student like me. To write about the reasons why I love MUN, 200 words may not be enough. Thus, I'd like to show the 2 main reasons. The uppermost factor making me adore MUN is its professional atmosphere and organization. Thanks to the responsibility of organizing team and delegates, MUN gives me a feeling that it is a real UN conference, not a simulated one. I admired your delegates who were enthusiastic and talented. They did give me a huge motivation to become a person like them. The second factor making me love MUN is its enticing privileges. I wondered how on earth MUN can offer such many great benefits. Not only can I brush up my English, but I also can improve other skills and break my former limit. Without any doubt, MUN is a wonderful playground for every student to prepare for a new lease of life. Lastly, I hope I can become a part of MUN family and have an unforgettable experience.
Recently, I have
come
across lots of information about
CYMUN
on the Facebook. The density of shares raised my curiosity about the conference,
so
I decided to learn more about it. After
nearly
one week reading up about the MUN, I found it appropriate for students,
especially
an English-major student like me. To write about the reasons why I
love
MUN, 200 words may not be
enough
.
Thus
, I'd like to
show
the 2 main reasons. The uppermost factor making me adore MUN is its professional atmosphere and organization. Thanks to the responsibility of organizing team and delegates, MUN gives me a feeling that it is a real UN conference, not a simulated one. I admired your delegates who were enthusiastic and talented. They did give me a huge motivation to become a person like them. The second factor making me
love
MUN is its enticing privileges. I wondered how on earth MUN can offer such
many
great benefits. Not
only
can I brush up my English,
but
I
also
can
improve
other
skills
and break my former limit. Without any doubt, MUN is a wonderful playground for every student to prepare for a new lease of life.
Lastly
, I hope I can become a part of MUN family and have an unforgettable experience.
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IELTS essay Why are you interested in MUN? (200 words maximum)

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
214 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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