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Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Analyse both sides of this argument.

Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Analyse both sides of this argument. kPoK
The use of technology is increasing rapidly in the modern world. Growing technological influence can even be seen in the classroom. The argument that technology will completely replace human teachers in the foreseeable future is a subject that is both supported and refuted by many. This essay will analyse this argument before declaring a position. Firstly, when communicating simple concepts that can be taught through repetitive games, machines seem capable of matching or even surpassing the teaching abilities of human beings. For example, several tablet applications are starting to be used in classrooms because they are able to hold the attention of young children and teach them tremendous amounts of vocabulary. Thus, it is clear that for simple concepts that can be taught through repetition, robotic teachers are as effective as human teachers. However, whether this proves true for more complex classroom concepts or situations remains questionable. It must be remembered that a teacher powered by artificial intelligence would have little to no control over its students. For example, it is commonly understood that children require the watchful eye of a teacher to ensure that they are indeed completing their class work and not fooling around during class time. Unfortunately, this is something that a robotic teacher simply could never provide. This evidence makes it thus doubtful that technology will ever completely replace the teacher in the classroom. In summary, both sides of the argument regarding the possibility of a technologically driven classroom have strong support. However, because class content must extend beyond simple concepts that can be learned through repetition, it is clear that the idea of having a class run entirely by a machine remains unlikely. I thus feel the scenario of automated classroom instruction will not materialise anytime in the foreseeable future
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of technology is increasing
rapidly
in the modern world. Growing technological influence can even be
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seen
in the classroom. The argument that technology will completely replace human
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teachers
in the foreseeable future is a subject
that is
both supported and refuted by
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many
. This essay will
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analyse
this argument
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before
declaring a position.

Firstly
, when communicating simple
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concepts
that can
be taught
through repetitive games, machines seem capable of matching or even surpassing the teaching abilities of human beings.
For example
, several tablet applications are starting to be
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used
in classrooms
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because
they are able to hold the attention of young children and teach them tremendous amounts of vocabulary.
Thus
, it is
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clear
that for simple
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concepts
that can
be taught
through repetition, robotic
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teachers
are as effective as human
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teachers
.
However
, whether this proves true for more complex classroom
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concepts
or situations remains questionable.

It
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must
be remembered
that a
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teacher
powered by artificial intelligence would have
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little
to no control over its students.
For example
, it is
commonly
understood that children require the watchful eye of a
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teacher
to ensure that they are
indeed
completing their
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class
work and not fooling around during
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class
time. Unfortunately, this is something that a robotic
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teacher
simply
could never provide. This evidence
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makes
it
thus
doubtful that technology will ever completely replace the
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teacher
in the classroom.

In summary, both sides of the argument regarding the possibility of a
technologically
driven classroom have strong support.
However
,
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because
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class
content
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must
extend beyond simple
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concepts
that can
be learned
through repetition, it is
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clear
that the
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idea
of having a
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class
run
entirely
by a machine remains unlikely. I
thus
feel the scenario of automated classroom instruction will not
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materialise
anytime in the foreseeable
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future
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IELTS essay Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Analyse both sides of this argument.

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