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Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with the statement. v.3

Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. v. 3
In the recent years, the technology is playing a vital role in the good life of the humans. The technology is becoming increasingly widespread around the world nowadays. There is no distance future. Machineries will totally replace the teachers in the classroom. However, I completely disagree with the given hook. I will explain both the viewpoints as well as add my own opinion in the below paragraphs. To start with, the machinery has certain advantages behind this occurs. Firstly, it helps to watch the lectures again and again. For example, if a student leaves any period regarding his study in school. He or she unable to understand again, as a teacher has no time. When the opt technology system, it provides videos, which they can see again and again. Secondly, some students have a lack of confidence. Because of this, they always stay away from their teachers. They deem that their tutors will punish due to their mistakes. Therefore, they like to study, sitting their home with the help of machinery. However, teachers are playing a vital role in the life of students. Professors are always emotional as well as helpful. For instance, teachers have in depth of knowledge about their courses. A coach knows about the situation of the pupil. What kind of education, he or she has to need. A supervisor can understand to learners with different activities. For poor students, lecturer will offer short term of education, which help to obtain the good marks. To conclude, even though the automation is being occupied the place for everything, but leaning about something by the tutor is very necessary. I judge that leaning from teachers have many advantages than automation.
In the recent years, the technology is playing a vital role in the
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good
life of the humans. The technology is becoming
increasingly
widespread around the world nowadays. There is no distance future.
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Machineries
will
totally
replace the
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teachers
in the classroom.
However
, I completely disagree with the
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given
hook. I will
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explain
both the viewpoints
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as well as
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add
my
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own
opinion in the below paragraphs.

To
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start
with, the machinery has certain advantages behind this occurs.
Firstly
, it
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helps
to
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watch
the lectures
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again
and
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again
.
For example
, if a
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student
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leaves
any period regarding his study in school. He or
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she
unable to understand
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again
, as a
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teacher
has no time. When
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the opt
technology system, it provides videos, which they can
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see
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again
and
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again
.
Secondly
,
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some
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students
have a lack of confidence.
Because of this
, they always stay away from their
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teachers
. They deem that their tutors will punish due to their mistakes.
Therefore
, they like to study, sitting their home with the
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help
of machinery.

However
,
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teachers
are playing a vital role in the life of
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students
. Professors are always emotional
as well
as helpful.
For instance
,
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teachers
have in depth of knowledge about their courses. A coach knows about the situation of the pupil. What kind of education, he or she
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has to
need. A supervisor can understand to learners with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
activities. For poor
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students
, lecturer will offer short term of education, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to obtain the
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good
marks.

To conclude
,
even though
the automation is
being occupied
the place for everything,
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but
leaning about something by the tutor is
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very
necessary. I judge that leaning from
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teachers
have
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many
advantages than automation.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
281 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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