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Technology in education.For or against?

Technology in education. For or against? m21bq
We live in a world where everything around us is only technology, on airport, at home, at school, at work. Children are the ones who are the most responsive to technology news, gadgets, and other wonders of modern world. On the other hand, no matter how advanced or smart computer program or product is, it can never come close to the knowledge and life experience a teacher brings. Several researches have been conducted and it has been proven time and again that teachers bring about a change which no technology can. A teacher simply does not impart knowledge or information. And teaching is definitely not about factsand figures. A teacher leads, guides, facilitates and mentors a student. They are role models who set an example to students and drive them towards a brighter future. A good teacher encourages independent thoughts and independent learning. He can be a positive influence, can be an inspiration to set and achieve goals. On the other hand, technology is important in education. The COVID-19 pandemic is quickly demonstrating why online education should be a vital part of teaching and learning the effective use of digital learning tools in classrooms can increase students engagement, help teachers improve their lesson plans. It can also helps students build essential 21st century skills. Virtual classrooms, video, augmented reality, robots, other technology tools can not only make class more lively. They can also create more inclusive learning environments and enable teachers to collect data on student performance. In my view, we must use technology as we updated ourselves with ongoing happening. By availing technology, we save time, the new generation taking interest in study as we are goiing through recent updates.
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, on airport, at home, at school, at work. Children are the ones who are the most responsive to
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technology
news, gadgets, and
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other
wonders of modern world. On the
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other
hand, no matter how advanced or smart computer program or product is, it can never
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come
close to the knowledge and life experience a
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teacher
brings. Several researches have
been conducted
and it has
been proven
time and again that
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teachers
bring about a
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can. A
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teacher
simply
does not impart knowledge or information. And teaching is definitely not about
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factsand
figures. A
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teacher
leads, guides, facilitates and mentors a
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student
. They are role models who set an example to
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students
and drive them towards a brighter future. A
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teacher
encourages independent thoughts and independent
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learning
. He can be a
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positive
influence, can be an inspiration to set and achieve goals. On the
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hand,
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technology
is
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in education. The COVID-19 pandemic is
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demonstrating why online education should be a vital part of teaching and
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the effective
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of digital
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tools in classrooms can increase
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students
engagement,
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help
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teachers
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their lesson plans. It can
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build essential 21st century
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skills
. Virtual classrooms, video, augmented reality, robots,
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technology
tools can not
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more lively. They can
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create more inclusive
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environments and enable
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teachers
to collect data on
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student
performance. In my view, we
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must
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use
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as we updated ourselves with ongoing happening. By availing
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, we save time, the new generation taking interest in study as we are
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goiing
through recent updates.
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IELTS essay Technology in education. For or against?

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