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Feeling of happiness on college students

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The feeling of happiness of college students concerning their courses varies depending on the type of program in which they are enrolled. Certificate students were pleased with their courses by 89%, while in the case of diploma students, only 17% showed a positive feeling about t. At this college, at both study levels, the greatest part of students was less than 35 years old. However, the share of certificate students being younger than 35 is higher than those being diploma students (97% against 79%).
The feeling of happiness of college
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concerning their courses varies depending on the type of program in which they
are enrolled
. Certificate
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students
were
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with their courses by 89%, while in the case of diploma
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,
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17%
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feeling about t. At this college, at both study levels, the greatest part of
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was less than 35 years
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.
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being younger than 35 is higher than those being diploma
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(97% against 79%).
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IELTS essay Feeling of happiness on college students

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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