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Describe a popular good manner in your culture

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Good manners play an important part in maintaining peace in a community. One of the most popular type of good behaviour I’d like to mention is having respect for the elderly. When I see someone give the older people a hand, this person can make a strong impression on me. Actually, I think there are many ways to pay repect to the older generation. The first one comes to my mind is that offer your help. For example, when you’re on public transportation, you can consider offering your seat to an elderly person, who might need to rest more than you. Another good manner I want to talk about is patient. You can be respectful by showing some patience when you encounter them instead of trying to hurry them along. If an elderly person is slow to get off the bus, subway, or elevator, or just walking down the street, don’t push past them. Let them take their time, so they are comfortable and don’t injure themselves. In my opinion, The elderly can often lose strength, balance and agility (sự nhanh nhẹn) because of their age, which can make some everyday activities that we take for granted more difficult. Providing even the smallest assistance may make their day a little easier, and demonstrate your respect in a courteous, thoughtful manner. Moreover, older people usually don’t move as quickly as they used to when they were younger, which means it can take them longer to do even the simplest of tasks, such as crossing the street. Therefore, patient is necessary for them.
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manners play an
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part in maintaining peace in a community. One of the most popular type of
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good
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behaviour
I’d like to mention is having respect for the
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elderly
. When I
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see
someone give the older
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people
a hand, this person can
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make
a strong impression on me.

Actually, I
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think
there are
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many
ways to pay
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repect
to the older generation. The
first
one
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comes
to my mind is that offer your
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help
.
For example
, when you’re on public transportation, you can consider offering your seat to an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
elderly
person, who might need to rest more than you. Another
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good
manner I want to talk about is patient. You can be respectful by showing
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some
patience when you encounter them
instead
of trying to hurry them along. If an
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elderly
person is slow to
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get
off the bus, subway, or elevator, or
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just
walking down the street, don’t push past them.
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Let
them take their time,
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so
they are comfortable and don’t injure themselves.

In my opinion, The
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elderly
can
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often
lose strength, balance and agility (
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sự
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nhanh
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nhẹn
)
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because
of their age, which can
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make
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some
everyday activities that we take for granted more difficult. Providing even the smallest assistance may
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make
their day a
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little
easier, and demonstrate your respect in a courteous, thoughtful manner.
Moreover
, older
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people
usually
don’t
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move
as
quickly
as they
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used
to when they were younger, which means it can take them longer to do even the simplest of tasks, such as crossing the street.
Therefore
, patient is necessary for them.
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IELTS essay Describe a popular good manner in your culture

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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