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Describe a convenient means of transportation in your city

Describe a convenient means of transportation in your city eR5bp
Although there are many kinds of transportation in my city, one of the most popular types I would like to describe is motocycle. It is so common that almost families have at least one motobike in their house. Nowadays, traffic is very disorderly. The roads are narrow and have many potholes. So I think that motorcycle is a good choice in the current situation. This kind of vehicle is more flexible than cars. In addition, the price of a motorbike is suitable to my salary. The motorcycle is very useful for my life and my job because it can helps people save a lot of time, when they go to school, as well as working. I can control the time easily when riding a motorbike to my student’s houses for tutoring. In the past, I used to ride my motorbike from HCMC to my hometown in HauGiang province and return. Now, it is still necessary to me. I have been driving it for more than 10 years. Although there is dangerous when I attend in traffic, I still love riding a motorcycle. I know that because infrastructure in our country is not very good, traffic jams or accidents often happen when many kinds of transportation means attend on narrow streets at the same time. Anyway, I think that not only me but also a lot of people like to ride motorbikes like me. In short, motorcycle is the most popular transportation means vehicle in our country.
Although there are
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kinds of transportation in my city, one of the most popular types I would like to
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describe
is
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motocycle
. It is
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so
common that almost families have at least one
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motobike
in their
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house
.

Nowadays, traffic is
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very
disorderly. The roads are narrow and have
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many
potholes.
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So
I
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think
that motorcycle is a
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good
choice in the
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current
situation. This kind of vehicle is more flexible than cars.
In addition
, the price of a
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motorbike
is suitable to my salary. The motorcycle is
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very
useful for my life and my job
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because
it can
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helps
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people
save
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a lot of
time, when they go to school,
as well
as working. I can control the time
easily
when riding a
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motorbike
to my student’s
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houses
for tutoring. In the past, I
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used
to ride my
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motorbike
from
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HCMC
to my hometown in
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HauGiang
province and return.
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Now
, it is
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necessary to me. I have been driving it for more than 10 years. Although there is
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dangerous
when I attend in traffic, I
still
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love
riding a motorcycle. I know that
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because
infrastructure in our country is not
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very
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good
, traffic jams or accidents
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often
happen when
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many
kinds of transportation
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means
attend on narrow streets at the same time. Anyway, I
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think
that not
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only
me
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but
also
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a lot of
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people
like to ride
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motorbikes
like me. In short, motorcycle is the most popular transportation means vehicle in our country.
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IELTS essay Describe a convenient means of transportation in your city

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