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Technology has more positive than negative effects on our relationships with other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology has more positive than negative effects on our relationships with other people. oEE3w

It is true that technology has had an influence on relationships with others. In various ways, and in my opinion there are both positive and negative effects. Firstly, nowadays with Covid-19, technology is important for connecting people to be easy but not talk face to face. For example, my friend and I live in other countries and can work together while I can update my life on the internet. Secondly, technology can help me stock file document and safe Finally, technology make me easy to use lifestyle for nowadays, easy and comfortable to use it. On the one hand, technology comes to life, sometimes it has negative effects for people. For example, the most new generations have short concentration because they use technology more than stay with my family and friends. On the other hand, them use technology has not balance, them feel do not have party, stay with themselves and them have introvert. In conclusion, technology has positive and negative effects on us but they should use in balance, it good benefit.

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technology
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positive
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negative
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Firstly
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technology
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important
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people
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but
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, my friend and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in other countries and can work together while I can update my life on the internet. Secondly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me stock file document and safe

Finally
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technology
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make
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use
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technology
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 to life, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
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negative
 effects for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. For example
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the most new
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because
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use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
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, them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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technology
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balance
, them feel do not have party, stay with themselves and them have introvert.

In conclusion
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 effects on us This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 in balance, It seems that a verb is missing after "it". Please verify.it isit was
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 benefit. 