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Are online Friends Real Friends?

Are online Friends Real Friends? KnnaR
To compare real friends with online friends, and while there are similarities, I believe that real friends is different in the sense that we have met in the past and really exist in your life. Therefore, I think we should be thoughtful about considering online friends as “Real Friends”. Due to the popularity of social media, making friends though these platforms seem easier to develop a friendship online, but it’s also accompanied with certain risk as well. The dangers of meeting or chatting with Online friends over the internet can include sexual predators, cyber crooks… In other words, the fear of not knowing who is actually behind the screen. Profile picture and the information given from the person that we talk to might be unreal. We should always stay alert. Moreover, number of online friends actually means nothing but vanity. I believe a quality friend is much more precious than numerous of friends. Conversely, Real friends are the people that we have met in our real life. The one who can keep sharing experiences and meeting together. Online friends maybe can share the joys with us but not the people to ask for help when we are in difficult situation. In spite of the differences, there is no denying that social media are the good platforms for us to get friends from different countries without exactly go to that place. In conclusion, It’s possible to take an online friendship to next level sometimes. If we set the boundaries not to overshare personal information with online friends. Having friends that can share joys and talk regularly aren’t bad. Somehow, I prefer the interaction with Offline friends that unfortunately cannot be transmitted by technology.
To compare
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, and while there are similarities, I believe that
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in the sense that we have met in the past and
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exist in your life.
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we should be thoughtful about considering
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Due to the popularity of social media, making
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though these platforms seem easier to develop a friendship
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,
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of meeting or chatting with
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Online
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over the internet can include sexual predators, cyber crooks…
In other words
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from the person that we talk to might be unreal. We should always stay alert.
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actually means nothing
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vanity. I believe a quality
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is much more precious than numerous of friends.

Conversely
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are the
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people
that we have met in our
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life. The one who can
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keep
sharing experiences and meeting together.
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maybe can share the joys with us
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platforms for us to
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, It’s possible to take an
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friendship to
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level
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sometimes
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If
we set the boundaries not to overshare personal information with
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aren’t
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. Somehow, I prefer the interaction with Offline
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that unfortunately cannot
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by technology.
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IELTS essay Are online Friends Real Friends?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
282 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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