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Logging rainforest has serious problems on animals and humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Logging rainforest has serious problems on animals and humans. eee9x
One of the major and controversial questions of the day is that erosion has a very dangerous effect on humans and living things. I fully agree that desertification can wreak havoc on the livelihoods of humans and other living things, and is discussed in the following article. Firstly, dense shrubs and deciduous fruit and leafy saplings are enhancing the beauty of many of the world's vineyards by creating a unique identity in the surrounding. Accordingly, our habitat maintains its equity with the help of such an undefined gift of nature. However, increasing urban business requires a lot of fuel for the power to be used, due to which forest are being cut down for logging, along with desertification. In addition, plants and seedlings use carbon dioxide for photosynthesis, and their harvesting increases the release of harmful gases in the atmosphere and leads to many diseases. For example, in the last few decades, erosion in India has upset the entire natural harmony with the polluted climate, with many new respiratory diseases taking over, with asthma being the most prominent form. Secondly, woodlands are a major source of rainfall which is effective in maintaining the ecosystem. This keeps the climate in check through this unique gift as a blessing of nature, providing a living temperature for humanity and all living beings. On the contrary, desertification destroys it continues to grow, the consonance of the weather will fluctuate greatly. For example, statistical surveillance in the Amazon rainforest in the United States has seen a 45 per cent decrease in rainfall over the past 10 years, mainly due to logging. Also, many other natural disasters have been observed, such as droughts, floods and lack of fertility in the land. Finally, I reiterate my statement and confer that humanity is suffering and the credits goes to desertification and logging therefore, we need to prevent in order to maintain the mellifluence of the habitat in order to cope with the various difficult situations that could endanger humanity and our lives. For this purpose, the government should also administer different kinds of strict laws, so that the climate remains clean and balanced and humanity is preserved.
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very
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dangerous
effect on humans and
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living
things. I
fully
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agree
that
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desertification
can wreak havoc on the livelihoods of humans and other
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living
things, and
is discussed
in the following article.

Firstly
, dense shrubs and deciduous fruit and leafy saplings are enhancing the beauty of
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many
of the world's vineyards by creating a unique identity in the surrounding.
Accordingly
, our habitat maintains its equity with the
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help
of such an undefined gift of nature.
However
, increasing urban business requires
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a lot of
fuel for the power to be
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used
, due to which forest are being
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cut
down for logging, along with
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desertification
.
In addition
, plants and seedlings
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use
carbon dioxide for photosynthesis, and their harvesting increases the release of harmful gases in the atmosphere and leads to
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many
diseases.
For example
, in the last few decades, erosion in India has upset the entire natural harmony with the polluted climate, with
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many
new respiratory diseases taking over, with asthma being the most prominent form.

Secondly
, woodlands are a major source of rainfall which is effective in maintaining the ecosystem. This
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keeps
the climate in
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check
through this unique gift as a blessing of nature, providing a
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living
temperature for
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humanity
and all
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living
beings.
On the contrary
,
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desertification
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destroys
it continues to grow, the consonance of the weather will fluctuate
greatly
.
For example
, statistical surveillance in the Amazon rainforest in the United States has
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seen
a 45 per cent decrease in rainfall over the past 10 years,
mainly
due to logging.
Also
,
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many
other natural disasters have
been observed
, such as droughts, floods and lack of fertility in the land.

Finally
, I reiterate my statement and confer that
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humanity
is suffering and the credits goes to
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desertification
and logging
therefore
, we need to
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prevent
in order to maintain the
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mellifluence
of the habitat in order to cope with the various difficult situations that could endanger
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humanity
and our
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lives
. For this purpose, the
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government
should
also
administer
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different
kinds of strict laws,
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so
that the climate remains clean and balanced and
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humanity
is preserved
.
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IELTS essay Logging rainforest has serious problems on animals and humans.

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