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Technology has cause ,continued causing,many problems.do you agree or disagree with the statement

Technology has cause, continued causing, many problems. 1RrM

Technology has cause, continued cause several problems. I donot agree with statement because it has solved numerous of problems and helps in awareness. Advancement in technology is allowing us to connect to people of different countries. It has helped in providing different informations. If there is some problem in one countries such as crime then every people will know it. For instance, if there is discrimination in women in one country then every women are able to raise their voice against it. On the other hand, if there are some natural disaster then every people from different countries will help. It helps in solving financial crisis and provides mental support. Furthermore, people can educate people in different activites such as childmarraige and many others. however there are some drawbacks it provides false infromation and also create online robbery. For example, people have different identity in their social media and In conclusion, the are few disadvantages but it has provided solution on many different areas.

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donot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
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because
 it has solved numerous of problems and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 in awareness.

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people
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countries
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helped
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The word 'informations' is a legal term. In standard English, the word 'information' is a non-count noun. Did you mean "information"?information
informations
. If there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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countries
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people
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country
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women
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some
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countries
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help
. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 in solving financial crisis and provides mental support.

Furthermore
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people
 can educate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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different
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activites
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childmarraige
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 others. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?however,
however
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some
 drawbacks it provides false Possible spelling mistake found.information
infromation
 and also
 create online robbery. For example
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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different
 identity in their social media Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphand.and!and?and:and,and;
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In conclusion
, Did you mean "they are" or "there are"?they arethere are
the are
 few disadvantages This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it has provided solution on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
 areas. 