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Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and your opinion. v.5

Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. v. 5 xwA1
Hosting an international sporting even has positive and negative sides. some people support the idea from a financial perspective. in this case, the country will become a tourist destination to probably hundreds of thousands of people from all over the world. Consequently, this will help recruit many employees and help the country create more jobs. This is what happened when south Africa hosted Football World cup. On the other hand, the oppositions to this idea will think about security alert in the light of having too many people from different culture at one place during the same period of time. This probably will open the door for fights, thefts operations as well as racism in some cases. Look at last Olympics held in China as an example.
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the country create more jobs. This is what happened when
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hosted Football World cup.

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about security alert in the light of having too
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IELTS essay Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. v. 5

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