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One of the most noticeable trends of today's world is an upsurge the number of people believing that in this modern era people are using advance technology gadgets and these type of gadgets are important. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of reason in one life. However, I do not entirely accept this, and I will explain why in this essay. There is a plethora of advantages favoring stance. The most dominant one is that if they use new technology gadgets then they can save their time not only contribute personal and professional development of person, but also lead to numerous of reason in various fields. Moreover, people can enhance the productivity and quality of their lives with much ease and efficacy. As a result, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of excellence and prosperity is concerned. Another pivotal reason behind this stance. First and foremost is that if people use technological gadgets then they can improve their quality of time and saving time they can spend with their families and friends. In conclusion, after considering all the viewpoints in aforementioned paragraphs, it can be concluded that government should improve technological gadgets in schools because if children use these items then they can easily gain success in their life.

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