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Technology bring many benefits but it can also cause social and environmental problems. In relation to new technology , primary duty of government should be focus on potential problems rather than benefits . Do you agree or disgree with this statement ?

Technology bring many benefits but it can also cause social and environmental problems. In relation to new technology, primary duty of government should be focus on potential problems rather than benefits. bYqMX
It is a common perception that a coin has two sides means if certain thing has benefit then it also has demerits. This happens same in case of technological innovations. Technology has both merits and demerits. It is not the duty of government to focus on problems created by technology rather than its benefits. In my view, I am partially disagree with statement and try to explain my views in upcoming paragraphs.
It is a common perception that a coin has two sides means if certain thing has benefit then it
also
has demerits. This happens same in case of technological innovations. Technology has both merits and demerits. It is not the duty of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to focus on problems created by technology
rather
than its benefits. In my view, I am
partially
Consider using a past participle here: "disagreed".
disagree
with statement and try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
my views in upcoming paragraphs.

IELTS essay Technology bring many benefits but it can also cause social and environmental problems. In relation to new technology, primary duty of government should be focus on potential problems rather than benefits.

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