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Technology and it's demand

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In today's era we can saw that every single people is using smart phones for their timepass and fir their work to 80 percent of human uses the technology rapidly in this genration every people use the technology and people enjoys the technology too Now human uses the transport for convinced in aged time people uses the animal rides for their travel Technology people accepting the technology rapidly
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the transport for convinced in aged time
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IELTS essay Technology and it's demand

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
67 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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