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Write a short narrative paragraph about the most memorable day of your life.

Write a short narrative paragraph about the most memorable day of your life. 6aYqB

Memories are the thing that I believe everyone who lives in the world has. And certainly, each people has the most memorable day of their life and so do I. I will tell you about the day that is so special for me, the most memorable day, and the day that I will never forget. It was a night that 2 days after the day I received the result of the National high school exam when I stayed at home alone. My friend told me that she saw the scholarship announcement of my college on Facebook. That time I felt so nervous and a little bit scared. Then I found my school’s website and searched for my result. Fortunately, my essay got a high score and I got a 30% scholarship. T knew that was not a big achievement for someone but for me, I was so proud of myself. This was the first success to give me more motivation than its value. I felt so lucky and thanks for my efforts. And I will never forget that day.

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 proud of myself. This was the first
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so
 lucky and thanks for my efforts. And I will never forget that day. 