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Technologies like Crispr allow interesting future possibilities like designer babies Selecting individual physical and mental traits like height Intelligence etc Should governments regulate how this technology is used Give your opinion v.2

Technologies like Crispr allow interesting future possibilities like designer babies Selecting individual physical and mental traits like height Intelligence etc Should governments regulate how this technology is used Give your opinion v. 2

In modern age, technology has taken over human. Interestingly, new gadgets and devices have even developed a probability of creating designer babies. In my opinion, this kind of technologies are a threat to the society. In this essay, we will discuss about the dangers of such technology and how a government can take action to control it.

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IELTS essay Technologies like Crispr allow interesting future possibilities like designer babies Selecting individual physical and mental traits like height Intelligence etc Should governments regulate how this technology is used Give your opinion v. 2

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