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Technological development have made the world to communicate to each other.

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Technological development have made the world to communicate to each other. With a busy life and easy ways of communicate we can avoiding people face to face communication. Nothing can replace the value of face to face communication over letters, email or telephone calls, but even then, messages get misinterpretend and a sense of connection is never truly established. Lets talk about face-to-face communicate, some people like to face-to-face communicate because the people who talk with other friends they can see what they feels when they talk, and then. I think, we can understand and connect what they said or talking about, and the last we can see the gesture, attitude, body language, tone of voice, then we can see what are they said is truth or lying but, face-to-face communicate had an inadvantages like sometimes we don’t have any flexible times. For the example, When I was in six grade my friends told me about she have some penguin in house, I know she is lying becouse the gesture and the bidy language can read exactly. The letter or telephone cells to have some advantages and inadvatages. I think this communicate can improve our skill in internet or IT, and then we can easy communicate with each others like we can video calls with many kinds of application, and the last we had many flexible time to send a messages to family or friends. But, email or telephone cells make us to take an hours to stay in front of the tab or laptop then it make us tired sometimes, we don’t know what they feels when they talk with us maybe they fells sad but we cant do the best for them, and the last is we should had an internet connections, it make peoples must be search some wifi in restaurant. For the example, when I was joined world scout jamboree in USA, I get acquainted with some people in different country and then she said if this jamboree is the end, she want to send me an email and she want to send me some cute stuff. So, when the jamboree end she is really send me that cute stuff like pencils, scraft, and distinctive hat of her country. So, I think the face-to-face communication and internet communication had an advantages and inadvantages each other, and …
Technological development have made the world to
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, we can understand and connect what they said or talking about, and the last we can
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what are they said is truth or lying
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in internet or IT, and then we can
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with each others like we can video calls with
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flexible time to
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cute stuff.
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, and distinctive hat of her country.

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IELTS essay Technological development have made the world to communicate to each other.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
390 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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