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Nowadays, communication can be done in various ways.

Nowadays, communication can be done in various ways. mKYq
Nowadays, communication can be done in various ways. Some people has opinion face-to-face communication is better than the other types of communication such as letters, email, or telephone calls. I think this statement depending on each person. We should start by taking a look at advantages and disadvantages of communication by face-to-face. There are several advantages of communication face-to-face. Firstly, we can hear a sound clearly. Secondly, by communicating face-to-face we can talk more and feel the situation at the time. For example, many business people prefer to communication face-to-face to talk about her business for the conversation clearly. One of disadvantages is about time or distance because we cannot talk face-to-face everyday with person who has far away home. Turning to statement about communications by online or letters. Nowadays, we can easily to communicate with some people who far from me. There are several of advantages of communication online or with letters. Firstly, we can communication every day or everywhere we want. For example, we can keep learning online because of pandemic covid-19. Besides that, we cannot feel the feeling same as face-to-face communication when we online communication or letters. In conclusion, I agree with the both of statement. The communication that we doing is depending on ourselves.
Nowadays,
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communication
can
be done
in various ways.
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has
opinion face-to-face
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communication
is better than the other types of
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communication
such as letters, email, or telephone calls. I
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think
this statement depending on each person.

We should
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start
by taking a look at advantages and disadvantages of
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communication
by face-to-face. There are several advantages of
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communication
face-to-face.
Firstly
, we can hear a sound
clearly
.
Secondly
, by communicating face-to-face we can talk more and feel the situation at the time.
For example
,
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many
business
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people
prefer to
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communication
face-to-face to talk about her business for the conversation
clearly
. One of disadvantages is about time or distance
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because
we cannot talk face-to-face
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everyday
with person who has far away home.

Turning to statement about communications by
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online
or letters. Nowadays, we can
easily
to communicate with
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some
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people
who far from me. There are several of advantages of
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communication
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online
or with letters.
Firstly
, we can
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communication
every day or everywhere we want.
For example
, we can
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keep
learning
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online
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because
of pandemic
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covid-19
.
Besides
that, we cannot feel the feeling same as face-to-face
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communication
when we
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online
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communication
or letters.

In conclusion
, I
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agree
with the both of statement. The
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communication
that
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we doing
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is depending
on ourselves.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, communication can be done in various ways.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
209 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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