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TEACHING MORAL VALUES TO STUDENT

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Nowadays, moral decadence to the youngsters has become a crucial problem that faces society. Based on the data from the Indonesian child protection commission in 2019, the number of children in conflict with the law reached 1. 251 cases. There are several cases that were done by the teenagers or students such as crime, violence, married by accident, bullying, gangster, drugs, free sex, etc. Although there are so many factors that cause youngsters to conflict with the law, I believe that moral decadence in our environment is the major cause of those problems. This essay will explain the Importance of Teaching Moral Values to the students at school, followed by a reasoned conclusion. The first and most important reason for teaching moral values to the students is in line with the laws of Republic of Indonesia No. 2 at 1989, article 4. From that law, it can be seen that the national education arranged to create human resources who are wise, skilled, have a good character, independent, religious, responsible to the environment and the nation. Therefore, education and teaching moral values are important to create human resources with those characters. That is why it needs an appropriate educational method to teach those values to the students, so it will be implemented to be positive life principles that will be developed by the students in their future. For example, once students have done a crime, violent or pregnant before married, their future will be destroyed by it. When they are in jail, of course, their study will be messy or if a girl student is pregnant, then she is getting married, of course, she cannot continue her study, being a young mother at the teenage age. A second reason to support the awareness of teaching morals at school is important to be done because moral values can make the student's behavior better. Furthermore, moral values also lead the students to decide the good and the bad things in their life. Morals are far more about good and bad than other values. A person can be described as immoral, yet there is no word for them not following values. Values are the basic principle that influences human behavior. If someone has basic life principles, they will be insusceptible by their environment. This principle will guide someone to behave. Values are positive potential in human beings. Values are the rules by which we make decisions about right and wrong, should and should not, good and bad. It also tells us which are more or less important, which is useful when we have the trade-off meeting one value over another. The final reason of How Important moral value to the student is Moral values are building blocks of people, and it builds a better character of a person. One should have moral values as a great part of his life to achieve something big in the future. The importance of moral values in a student’s life is immense because as they take their first step towards life, it matters that they do it right. Morals and ethics are values that last a lifetime and mold a person. A student who goes through his education ethically will be richer and wiser for it as gains real knowledge. As moral values are ingrained in his personality, he will gain respect from everyone around him. To summarize, It is essential to educate and teach moral values to develop human resources with certain characteristics. It is vital to encourage the awareness of teaching morality in schools that moral principles can improve student behavior. Furthermore, moral values guide students in deciding what is good and wrong in their lives. Moral values are extremely important in a student's life since they must start their initial steps in life correctly.
Nowadays,
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moral
decadence to the youngsters has become a crucial problem that faces society. Based on the data from the Indonesian child protection commission in 2019, the number of children in conflict with the
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law
reached 1. 251 cases. There are several cases that
were done
by the
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teenagers
or
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students
such as crime, violence, married by accident, bullying, gangster, drugs, free sex, etc. Although there are
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so
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many
factors that cause youngsters to conflict with the
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law
, I believe that
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moral
decadence in our environment is the major cause of those problems. This essay will
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explain
the Importance of
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Teaching
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Moral
Values to the
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students
at school, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

The
first
and most
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important
reason for
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teaching
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moral
values to the
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students
is in line with the
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laws
of Republic of Indonesia No. 2 at 1989, article 4. From that
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law
, it can be
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seen
that the national education arranged to create
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human
resources who are wise, skilled, have a
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good
character, independent, religious, responsible to the environment and the nation.
Therefore
, education and
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teaching
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moral
values are
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important
to create
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human
resources with those characters.
That is
why it needs an appropriate educational method to teach those values to the
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students
,
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so
it will
be implemented
to be
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positive
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life
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principles
that will
be developed
by the
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students
in their future.
For example
, once
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students
have done a crime, violent or pregnant
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before
married, their future will be
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destroyed
by it. When they are in jail,
of course
, their study will be messy or if a girl
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student
is pregnant, then she is getting married,
of course
, she cannot continue her study, being a young mother at the teenage age.

A second reason to support the awareness of
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teaching
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morals
at school is
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important
to
be done
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because
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moral
values can
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make
the student's behavior better.
Furthermore
,
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values
also
lead the
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students
to decide the
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good
and the
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bad
things in their
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life
.
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Morals
are far more about
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good
and
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bad
than other values. A person can be
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described
as immoral,
yet
there is no word for them not following values. Values are the basic
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principle
that influences
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human
behavior. If someone has basic
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life
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principles
, they will be insusceptible by their environment. This
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principle
will guide someone to behave. Values are
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positive
potential in
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human
beings. Values are the
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rules
by which we
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make
decisions about right and
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wrong
, should and should not,
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good
and
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bad
. It
also
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tells
us which are more or less
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, which is useful when we have the trade-off meeting one
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value
over another.

The final reason of How
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Important
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moral
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value
to the
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student
is
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Moral
values are building blocks of
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people
, and it builds a better character of a person. One should have
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moral
values as a great part of his
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life
to achieve something
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big
in the future. The importance of
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moral
values in a
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student’s
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life
is immense
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because
as they take their
first
step towards
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life
, it matters that they do it right.
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Morals
and ethics are values that last a lifetime and mold a person. A
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student
who goes through his education
ethically
will be richer and wiser for it as gains real knowledge. As
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moral
values
are ingrained
in his personality, he will gain respect from everyone around him.

To summarize
, It is essential to educate and teach
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moral
values to develop
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human
resources with certain characteristics. It is vital to encourage the awareness of
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teaching
morality in schools that
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moral
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principles
can
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improve
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student
behavior.
Furthermore
,
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moral
values guide
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students
in deciding what is
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good
and
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wrong
in their
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lives
.
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Moral
values are
extremely
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important
in a student's
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life
since they
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must
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start
their initial steps in
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life
correctly
.
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IELTS essay TEACHING MORAL VALUES TO STUDENT

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
629 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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