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Task1---Describe the steps through which you once learned a new subject and explain how you learned it. Please include details and examples in your response. v.1

Task1---Describe the steps through which you once learned a new subject and explain how you learned it. Please include details and examples in your response. v. 1
Over the next decades, the use of books will certainly be replaced by online learning. In fact, nowadays, there are already many online resources for students to consult from anywhere around the world. In this essay I will address the two main reasons why this revolution will put an end to printed literature. Above all, almost everything can be found on the internet these days. This availability of bibliography is true not only for today´s newspapers and guidelines, but also for old books and magazines. For instance, if research about Roman Architecture is being done, more up-to-date resources and even drawings can be found on this topic online than in libraries. In fact, online research tends to be much easier nowadays as it has instant and great availability of resources than old libraries where books are out-of-date. In addition, portability of e-books is making online replacement of paper books come real. In other words, one can read books and study any subject from kindles, iPads, computers and cell phones. For example, Cardiology complete guidelines can be downloaded into computers or other devices and read wherever and whenever the user wants to. Therefore, undoubtedly, carrying multiple books in small electronic devices will supersede paper books because of its practicality. In conclusion, online learning availability and practicality in day to day activities will certainly make boooks disappear. Reading multiple books at one computer rather than carrying material to read from libraries will soon achieve the disappearance of books as we used to know.
Over the
next
decades, the
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use
of
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books
will
certainly
be replaced
by
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online
learning. In fact, nowadays, there are already
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
resources for students to consult from anywhere around the world. In this essay I will address the two main reasons why this revolution will put an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
to printed literature.

Above all
, almost everything can
be found
on the internet these days. This availability of bibliography is true not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
for
The character between 'today' and 's' is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use "today’s" (curly apostrophe) or "today's" (straight apostrophe).
today´s
newspapers and guidelines,
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but
also
for
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old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and magazines.
For instance
, if research about Roman Architecture is
being done
, more up-to-date resources and even drawings can
be found
on this topic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
than in libraries. In fact,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
research tends to be much easier nowadays as it has instant and great availability of resources than
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
libraries where
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books
are out-of-date.

In addition
, portability of e-books is making
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online
replacement of paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
real.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
other words, one can read
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and study any subject from kindles, iPads, computers and cell phones.
For example
, Cardiology complete guidelines can
be downloaded
into computers or other devices and read wherever and whenever the user wants to.
Therefore
,
undoubtedly
, carrying multiple
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
electronic devices will supersede paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of its practicality.

In conclusion
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
learning availability and practicality in day to day activities will
certainly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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boooks
disappear. Reading multiple
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
at one computer
rather
than carrying material to read from libraries will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
achieve the disappearance of
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books
as we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to know.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Task1---Describe the steps through which you once learned a new subject and explain how you learned it. Please include details and examples in your response. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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