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Task 2 writing , online coaching advantages

Task 2 writing, online coaching advantages 2aljb
In the recent times, popularity for online classes and training increased rapidly rather than in real offices. I believe, that teaching through virtual methods is a very innovative approach and it's advantages definitely outweigh the drawbacks. In this essay, I will enlist a few pros and cons of online approach and will support my opinion through relevant examples. Firstly, the most significant advantage of virtual coaching is comfort. Many people prefer this because they can attend their classes from the comfort of their homes at anytime of the day and need not travel places, in the troublesome traffic in India. For instance, if I want to attend a spoken english class in a coaching centre, there will be a lot of pressure for me to leave early and get on a bus or train to go there, whereas, with online coaching it's just one click away, thus, saving time and energy. It is also economically efficient, as all we need for this is a proper internet connection. Interactive sessions can be conducted, as effectively as in offline manner. However, virtual coaching comes with a few drawbacks, one of them being the lack of hands-on experience. For example, if I want to attend an Anatomy class, it will be more informative when I attend an offline class, where I get to practice on a cadaver than merely seeing it on a screen. In addition, poor network can effect the quality of audio and video, and trainees might find it difficult to follow the session effectively. In conclusion, the advantages like attending classes at the comfort of their homes and being economically plausible, online coaching is an effective approach with notable advantages. Finally, in my opinion, if put to good use online coaching is a great advancement.
In the recent times, popularity for
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online
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classes
and training increased
rapidly
rather
than in real offices. I believe, that teaching through virtual methods is a
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very
innovative approach and it's
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advantages
definitely outweigh the drawbacks. In this essay, I will enlist a few pros and cons of
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online
approach and will support my opinion through relevant examples.

Firstly
, the most significant
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advantage
of virtual
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coaching
is comfort.
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Many
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people
prefer this
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because
they can
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attend
their
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classes
from the comfort of their homes at anytime of the day and need not travel places, in the troublesome traffic in India.
For instance
, if I want to
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attend
a spoken
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english
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class
in a
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coaching
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centre
, there will be
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a lot of
pressure for me to
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leave
early and
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get
on a bus or train
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to go
there, whereas, with
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online
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coaching
it's
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just
one click away,
thus
, saving time and energy. It is
also
economically
efficient, as all we need for this is a proper internet connection. Interactive sessions can
be conducted
, as
effectively
as in offline manner.

However
, virtual
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coaching
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comes
with a few drawbacks, one of them being the lack of hands-on experience.
For example
, if I want to
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attend
an Anatomy
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class
, it will be more informative when I
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attend
an offline
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class
, where I
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get
to practice on a cadaver than
merely
seeing it on a screen.
In addition
, poor network can effect the quality of audio and video, and trainees might find it difficult to follow the session
effectively
.

In conclusion
, the
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advantages
like attending
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classes
at the comfort of their homes and being
economically
plausible,
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online
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coaching
is an effective approach with notable
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advantages
.
Finally
, in my opinion, if put to
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good
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use
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online
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coaching
is a great advancement.
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IELTS essay Task 2 writing, online coaching advantages

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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