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Some people agree that buying products locally can be advantageous. Do you agree or disagree?

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Buying habits have changed drastically during the past few years in a majority of people. It is erroneous to say that there are no or less advantages if we buy products from the local areas. I certainly agree with the view that purchasing from the local stores can be highly advantageous to people and the local communities. To commence, the most significant factor that behaves as the benefit of buying something locally is that it enhances the economy of a country. Consumers can boost the the growth and development of a nation as the money circulates within and provide a sense of security for the future of the small-scale businesses. Moreover, this could result in the better productivity and advancement of the products because the demands rise eventually. To illustrate, if someone buys a mobile phone from a local store, people around him or her would automatically be keen to find out where he or she get it from and ultimately, this leads to the growth in yield of the item to meet the demands of public. Therefore, local buyers can help in increasing the country's economy level. Furthermore, people do not have to waste their precious time in order to purchase if they are getting the products from the markets nearby. Sometimes, purchasing an item such as electrical appliances can be tedious and hectic process since all the pros and cons of the product should ne kept in mind before buying it. Therefore, if the market place is close to a person, this task can be accomplished in lesser time. In addition, one can be at peace that he or she has shopped it locally so, in future if there's something wrong with the item, it can be replaced easily. Hence, time consumption can be certainly reduced and utilized in something more significant. In conclusion, it can be said that certain advantages can be witnessed by shopping from the local places, to be specific, it saves a lot of time and helps in the growth of financial resources of a nation.

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