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Some people consider Climate change has negative effect on business, while other think that it can provide with more business options.

Some people consider Climate change has negative effect on business, while other think that it can provide with more business options. YdgGj
A significant number of people attributes, environmental change impose negative impact, however, perspective of other people is that it bestows with a lot of business opportunities. This essay will shed light on both sides of the spectrum, positive and negative, and eventually will provide with my opinion. To begin with, because climate is getting hot to great extent nowadays, masses find it difficult to go outside, and to get tackled the hot climate especially in summer season. In addition to it, people also refrain to visit gulf countries, merely for their harsh conditions, which ultimately put the business of plethora of people in those countries to be lessened. For instance, because individuals find hard to cope with blazing hot climate conditions, they do not prefer to visit the tourist attractions in gulf countries like Dubai, which can put business of owners get plummeted. Although, consequences of climate change can decrease opportunities, on the flip side, masses also claim, climate change amusing them by increase in employment for particular fields. To illustrate, because of the climate which ought to be more polluted by blinking eye, governments and other environmental organisations demand a plethora of high skilled people, who can work together and are supposed to make instruments, which can aid in order to get resolved this cost worthy problem. , under a platform, which can enhance the employment opportunities. Moreover, there are mesmerising profit rates of the organisations, which are manufacturing solar pannels for capturing sunlight from blazing sun as a result of global warming. For example China adopted solar light systems for electricity generation, by the acquisition of bennfit from changing environment. Therefore, it is acknowledged climate change is advantages for employment growth. In the final analysis, after taking consideration of pros and cons of climate change, I reached at the decision that change in climate can boosts the business life.
A significant number of
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attributes, environmental
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impose
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negative
impact,
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, perspective of other
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people
is that it bestows with
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a lot of
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business
opportunities. This essay will shed light on both sides of the spectrum,
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positive
and
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, and
eventually
will provide with my opinion.

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begin
with,
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because
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climate
is getting hot to great extent nowadays, masses find it difficult to go outside, and to
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get
tackled the hot
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climate
especially
in summer season.
In addition
to it,
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people
also
refrain to visit gulf countries,
merely
for their harsh conditions, which
ultimately
put the
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business
of plethora of
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people
in those countries to
be lessened
.
For instance
,
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because
individuals find
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hard
to cope with blazing hot
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climate
conditions, they do not prefer to visit the tourist attractions in gulf countries like Dubai, which can put
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business
of owners
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get
plummeted.

Although, consequences of
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climate
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change
can decrease opportunities, on the flip side, masses
also
claim,
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climate
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change
amusing them by increase in employment for particular fields. To illustrate,
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because
of the
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climate
which ought to be more polluted by blinking eye,
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governments
and other environmental
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organisations
demand a plethora of high skilled
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people
, who can work together and
are supposed
to
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make
instruments, which can aid in order to
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get
resolved this cost worthy problem.
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,
under a platform, which can enhance the employment opportunities.
Moreover
, there are
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mesmerising
profit rates of the
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organisations
, which are manufacturing solar
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pannels
for capturing sunlight from blazing sun
as a result
of global warming.
For example
China adopted solar light systems for electricity generation, by the acquisition of
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bennfit
from changing environment.
Therefore
, it
is acknowledged
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climate
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change
is advantages for employment growth. In the final analysis, after taking consideration of pros and cons of
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climate
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change
, I reached at the decision that
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change
in
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climate
can
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boosts
the
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business
life.
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IELTS essay Some people consider Climate change has negative effect on business, while other think that it can provide with more business options.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
311 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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