Task 2: In many countries imprisonment is the most common solution to crimes. However, some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1
Task 2: In many countries imprisonment is the most common solution to crimes. However, some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution. v. 1
As we all aware, nowadays, reaching out to university has become highly challenging. This essay agrees to this fact. The essay first look into the troubles of the underprivileged and then will discuss on the inconvenience of the wealthier students.
As like most of the educational institutions, this college has its own norms, especially for the transportation. It is mandated for all students to use only the university bus. Which obviously means that everyone needs to pay their transportation fee. Besides having plenty of low-cost travel options, like public transits, bike sharing, economically backward grads have to bear this expense. For an instance, if a graduate opts train facility, it costs him approximately Rs. 1000/- per month, which is far more cheaper than the one he was charged.
On the other hand, the high society pupils find it hard to use this mode of transportation. The most common problem they foresee is the timing. With no exceptions, they have to show up. Furthermore, they lack their comforts in this. For example, a high society student can come in his car without any hassle. Moreover, he can also support his needy friends who cannot afford the transportation charge. However, it is not encouraged as per the terms.
In conclusion, everyone has some complications in accessing the university, which is not only limited to students, but also includes teaching and non-teaching staffs. However, it has to be accepted that university is treating each and everyone, equally irrespective of their social status that needs to be appreciated.
As we all aware, nowadays, reaching out to
university
has become
highly
challenging. This essay
agrees
to this fact. The essay
first
look into the troubles of the underprivileged and then will discuss on the inconvenience of the wealthier students.
As like most of the educational institutions, this college has its
own
norms,
especially
for the
transportation
. It
is mandated
for all students to
use
only
the
university
bus.
Which
obviously
means that everyone needs to pay their
transportation
fee.
Besides
having
plenty
of low-cost travel options, like public transits, bike sharing,
economically
backward grads
have to
bear this expense. For an instance, if a graduate opts train facility, it costs him approximately Rs. 1000/- per month, which is far
more cheaper
than the one he
was charged
.
On the other hand
, the high society pupils find it
hard
to
use
this mode of
transportation
. The most common problem they foresee is the timing. With no exceptions, they
have to
show
up.
Furthermore
, they lack their comforts in this.
For example
, a high society student can
come
in his car without any hassle.
Moreover
, he can
also
support his needy friends who cannot afford the
transportation
charge.
However
, it is not encouraged as per the terms.
In conclusion
, everyone has
some
complications in accessing the
university
, which is not
only
limited to students,
but
also
includes teaching and non-teaching staffs.
However
, it
has to
be
accepted
that
university
is treating each and
everyone
,
equally
irrespective of their social status that needs to
be appreciated
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes