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Task 2. Discuss the views and give opinion

Task 2. Discuss the views and give opinion JLy8D
The earth has been continuing to behold that the most prioritative accusers of a number of problems such environmental as a global warming and a pollution are private cars and without sharing transport systems and several citizens believe authorities raise expenditure rate of same old trend, nevertheless others think that they need more expend finance from their budget to improve the new trend which electric cars and other less pollutant cars. I intend to argue that second trend is more preferable for the life of our descents and I will make an effort to support my view and both sides of the performance with related explanations and experiments below. First of all, it is undeniable fact that if we cannot put prohibitions or stop current most pollutant cars system, we must begin to find new planet for ourselves and our progeniesʼ future. Due to the fact we must start to produce and utilize new typical transportation systems as un pollutant electric cars and gasoline cars. According to statistics of World statistics institution, they provided reveal that exponentially 79% of all pollution is owned by private cars. Secondly, it is vitally important to spend money to road-way systems at the same time it is useless that to spend for first one trend in the future. Our transports affect that it seems negligible parts of their carsʼ balloons leave on the highways and this event manipulate to melt in the hot days. These moltened rubs also environment and wild lifespans of air. In accordance with main staff of Germanyʼs Munchen airport is Olen Schuler said that they had been continuing to gather uncountable portion of balloons of airplanes on the surfaces of main highways. It was worst. Indeed it is necessary how for solving pollution issues and economy. By way of conclusion, this topic is not hard to say and I have tried to subordinate main points of my humble opinion with useful car species and aware of erasers. Recommendations of famous politicians to all governments, they should grow production rate of cars which they have a least pollutivity level.
The earth has been continuing to behold that the most
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prioritative
accusers of a number of problems such environmental as a global warming and a pollution are private
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cars
and without sharing transport
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systems
and several citizens believe authorities raise expenditure rate of same
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old
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trend
,
nevertheless
others
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think
that they need more expend finance from their budget to
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improve
the new
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trend
which electric
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cars
and other less pollutant
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cars
. I intend to argue that second
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trend
is more preferable for the life of our descents and I will
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make
an effort to support my view and both sides of the performance with related explanations and experiments below.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, it is undeniable fact that if we cannot put prohibitions or
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stop
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current
most pollutant
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cars
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system
, we
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must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
to find new planet for ourselves and our
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progeniesʼ
future. Due to the fact we
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must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
to produce and utilize new typical transportation
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systems
as
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un
pollutant electric
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cars
and gasoline
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cars
. According to statistics of World statistics institution, they provided reveal that
exponentially
79% of all pollution is
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owned
by private cars.

Secondly
, it is
vitally
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important
to spend money to road-way
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
systems
at the same time it is useless that to spend for
first
one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trend
in the future. Our transports affect that it seems negligible parts of their
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carsʼ
balloons
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leave
on the highways and this
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event
manipulate to melt in the hot days. These
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moltened
rubs
also
environment and wild lifespans of air. In accordance with main staff of
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Germanyʼs
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Munchen
airport is Olen
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Schuler
said that they had been continuing to gather uncountable portion of balloons of airplanes on the surfaces of main highways. It was worst.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Indeed
it is necessary how for solving pollution issues and economy.

By way of conclusion, this topic is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to say and I have tried to subordinate main points of my humble opinion with useful
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car
species and aware of erasers. Recommendations of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
politicians to all
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
, they should grow production rate of
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cars
which they have
Use "the" with the superlative.
a
least
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pollutivity
level.
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IELTS essay Task 2. Discuss the views and give opinion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
348 words
5.5
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