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Describe a time when you failed.

Describe a time when you failed. XVb1P
Well, the person are failed in any situation because they do not make proper strategy and sometime less management. That means not people are useless or they have not knowledge about those things but sometimes many circumstances occur  and person are not able to fullfill that. Here i would like to talk about one incident when I was failed to organized a trip. Me and my friends were decided to visit dalhousie. As soon as possible, we maked plan immediately.   Furthermore, these trip was organized by me. firstly, i booked tickets. Our package was only Ahmedabad to Ahmedabad so we needed to go there by our self. Moreover we decided to go there one day prior because we all wanted to visit sabarmati so that time i thought, i will booked hotel after reaching there. But when we reached there that time we tried hard to find rooms but we didn't find even one room Approximately 1 hr later we decided to spend whole night on railway station waiting room because we didn't have any option. Eventually, That time my all companions blamed me and it was extremely obvious because i took one responsibility and i was not able to complete it. So it was my bad and that time i felt very guilty. And that time my whole trip was spoiled due to this reason.
Well, the person
are failed
in any situation
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because
they do not
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make
proper strategy and sometime less management. That means not
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people
are
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useless or
they have not knowledge about those things
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but
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sometimes
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many
circumstances occur
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and person are not able to
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fullfill
that. Here
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i
would like to talk about one incident when I
was failed
to organized a trip.
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Me
and my friends
were decided
to visit
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dalhousie
. As
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soon
as possible, we
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maked
plan immediately.
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Furthermore
, these trip
was organized
by me.
firstly
,
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i
booked tickets. Our package was
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only
Ahmedabad to Ahmedabad
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so
we needed to go there by our self.
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Moreover
we decided to go there one day prior
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because
we all wanted to visit
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sabarmati
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so
that
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time
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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thought
,
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i
will
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booked
hotel after reaching there.
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But
when we reached there that
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time
we tried
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hard
to find rooms
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but
we didn't find even one room Approximately 1 hr later we decided to spend whole night on railway station waiting room
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because
we didn't have any option.
Eventually
, That
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time
my all companions blamed me and it was
extremely
obvious
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because
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
took one responsibility and
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i
was not able to complete it.
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So
it was my
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bad
and that
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time
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i
felt
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very
guilty. And that
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time
my whole trip
was spoiled
due to this reason.
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IELTS essay Describe a time when you failed.

Essay
  American English
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227 words
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