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To solve the problem of Traffic congestion government should provide public transportation at free cost for 24 hours, a day of7.

To solve the problem of Traffic congestion government should provide public transportation at free cost for 24 hours, a day of7. BM8xV
Traffic congestion is a common problem in the world facing today. A plethora individuals reckons that government should develop public transport, and it will be free for everyone in order to reduce congestion of traffic. I completely disagree with this notion. There are several reasons why authorities need to take this step. The first and foremost are that a number of destitute lives in society who cannot afford the a car. If public transportation available at zero cost it will be beneficial for poor people and also they travel in this kind of transportation instend of taxi and van. As result, it will reduce traffic at city center. Furthermore, many citizens have a hectic schedule. If they can not reach at theri time, they might be less their job. however, every citizens pay the tax regularly so, at least some kind of facilities they use at free of cost. On the other hand, others believe that government be going to free healthcare, education which are immensely vital. In addition, education and healthcare are the first priority in compared to public transport. Moreover, people can use the bicycle and other mode of transport to reduce the traffic congestion. The last but not least government shall make strict rule about traffic. If anyone break rule make sure they punish. To conclusion, I believe that government should not provide free public transport in order to reduce traffic instead of making some policy and people use bicycle and other transportation.
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Traffic
congestion is a common problem in the world facing
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today
. A plethora individuals reckons that
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government
should develop
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public
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transport
, and it will be
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free
for everyone in order to
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reduce
congestion of
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traffic
. I completely disagree with this notion. There are several reasons why authorities need to take this step. The
first
and foremost are that a number of destitute
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lives
in society who cannot afford
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the a
car. If
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public
transportation available at zero cost it will be beneficial for poor
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people
and
also
they travel in this kind of transportation
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instend
of taxi and van. As result, it will
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reduce
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traffic
at city center.
Furthermore
,
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many
citizens have a hectic schedule. If they can not reach at
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theri
time, they might be less their job.
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however
, every citizens pay the tax
regularly
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so
, at least
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some
kind of facilities they
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use
at
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free
of cost. On the
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other
hand, others believe that
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government
be going to
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free
healthcare, education which are
immensely
vital.
In addition
, education and healthcare are the
first
priority in compared to
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public
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transport
.
Moreover
,
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people
can
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use
the bicycle and
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other
mode of
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transport
to
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reduce
the
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traffic
congestion. The last
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but
not
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least
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government
shall
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make
strict
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rule
about
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traffic
.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
anyone
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break
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rule
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make
sure they punish. To conclusion, I believe that
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government
should not provide
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free
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public
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transport
in order to
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reduce
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traffic
instead
of making
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some
policy and
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people
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use
bicycle and
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other
transportation.
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IELTS essay To solve the problem of Traffic congestion government should provide public transportation at free cost for 24 hours, a day of7.

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