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Importance of Art

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It is commonly believed that art plays a primitive role in children lives. It will helps to improve creativity and imagination in their work through the art. Infact i thought that arts will include in the school along with other subjects. But students need to give importance to both art and other subjects as well in order to nurture their lives. Firstly art will play crucial role in children, specially young children to improve their creativity and imagination capabilities. They can use these art talent in their work to show their culture and creativity. Otherwise it will impact their communication skills and public apperances in the adulthood. Using the art children can show their emotions and communicate effictively. Young children don't have much language skill, instead of it they will use art to express their feelings and interests. So many child psychologists learning the art to understand their mood and behaviour. Based on all these statements i am concluding that art will plays crucial role in children lives to improve their creative thinking and imaginary levels. Other subjects also important to children like physics, social studies and mathematics to gain basic knowledge. It will be a best suggestion if art also include in the school curriculum.
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commonly
believed that
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art
plays a primitive role in
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children
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improve
creativity and imagination in their work through the
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art
.
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arts


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will
include in the school along with other subjects.
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But
students need to give importance to both
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art
and other subjects
as well
in order to nurture their
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lives
.

Firstly
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art
will play crucial role in
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children
,
specially
young
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children
to
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improve
their creativity and imagination capabilities. They can
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use
these
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art
talent in their work to
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show


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their
culture and creativity.
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Otherwise
it will impact their communication
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skills
and public
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apperances
in the adulthood. Using the
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art
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children
can
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show
their emotions and
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communicate


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effictively
. Young
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children
don't have much language
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skill
,
instead
of it they will
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use
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art
to express their feelings and interests.
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So
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many
child psychologists learning the
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art
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to


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understand
their mood and
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behaviour
.

Based on all these statements
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i
am concluding that
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art
will
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plays
crucial role in
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children
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lives
to
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improve
their creative thinking and imaginary levels. Other subjects
also
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important
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to


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children
like physics, social studies and mathematics to gain basic knowledge. It will be
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a
best suggestion if
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art
also
include in the school curriculum.
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IELTS essay Importance of Art

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
206 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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