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task 1 The graph shows information about the shifts in three types of crime both in Wales and in England over the period between 1970 and 2005

task 1 The graph shows information about the shifts in three types of crime both in Wales and in England over the period between 1970 and 2005 1n7an

The graph shows information about the shifts in three types of crime both in Wales and in England over the period between 1970 and 2005. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there was a gradual increase in the rate of street robbery, while the numbers of both in house burglary and car theft saw a fluctuation over the period shown. Looking at the details, as regards street robbery started at zero then levelled off during 20-year period between 1970 and 1990. At which point it increased gradually finishing at 0, 2 million in 2005. By contrast, the rate of car theft began at 0, 4 million in 1970, and it experienced a noticeable growth over two decades between 1970 and 1990, after that it grew sharply during the next 5 years. It reached its peach at 1, 6 in 1995. Having reached its peak, it then witnessed a significant decrease at 1 million over the next decade. If we look at house burglary, the trend started at 0, 2 in 1970. It saw a fluctuation between 0, 2 and 0, 4 during the period in question.

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By contrast, the rate of car theft began at 0, 4 million in 1970, and it experienced a noticeable growth You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 two decades between 1970 and 1990, after that it grew sharply
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 5 years. It reached its peach at 1, 6 in 1995. Having reached its peak, it then witnessed a significant decrease at 1 million You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 the next
 decade. If we look at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
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 at 0, 2 in 1970. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
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 a fluctuation between 0, 2 and 0, 4 during the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
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