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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.

In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. xDl2b
Earlier students did their higher education in their country, but now due to globalisation students have a lot of opportunities to go to foreign countries for higher education. I would like to discuss the pros and cons of this development in this essay. One advantage of pursuing higher studies abroad is that students get to interact with different kinds of people and learn about new cultures and languages. This helps to enhance their perspectives. For example, recent studies have shown that people who have studied and worked in different counties are more adaptive and knowledgeable. They can have better career opportunities because they bring new ideas and technology. On the other hand, studying abroad has its own cons. Students who tend to go to other countries for higher education try to make the new country their home. They finish their studies, start with their career and settle down there. For example many Indian students go to foreign countries like the United States of America to pursue their higher education. Instead of returning to their country after completing their studies, they get enamoured of the sophisticated lifestyle of the rich country and choose to live there. In this way, many developing and under developed countries lose valuable human resources. In conclusion, there are both benefits and drawbacks to studying abroad. The main advantage is that the students get to learn a lot of new things while studying abroad. The main disadvantage is that they may choose not to return to their country and thus fail to contribute to its development.
Earlier
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globalisation
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for higher
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. I would like to discuss the pros and cons of this development in this essay.

One advantage of pursuing higher
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studies
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abroad
is that
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students
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get
to interact with
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different
kinds of
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people
and learn about
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new
cultures and languages. This
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helps
to enhance their perspectives.
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, recent
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have shown that
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people
who have studied and worked in
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different
counties are more adaptive and knowledgeable. They can have better career opportunities
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because
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new
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ideas
and technology.

On the other hand
, studying
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cons.
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try to
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their home. They finish their
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,
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with their career and settle down there.
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Indian
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go to foreign
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like the United States of America to pursue their higher
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education
.
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of returning to their
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country
after completing their
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, they
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enamoured
of the sophisticated lifestyle of the rich
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country
and choose to
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live
there. In this way,
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many
developing and under developed
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countries
lose valuable human resources.

In conclusion
, there are both benefits and drawbacks to studying
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abroad
. The main advantage is that the
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students
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get
to learn
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a lot of
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new
things while studying
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abroad
. The main disadvantage is that they may choose not to return to their
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country
and
thus
fail to contribute to its development.
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IELTS essay In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
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