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From the time I was born until now, many events have happened in my life and there are many people I have met. But I must say that the most important person in my life is none other than my father. My father is currently a middle-aged man. Before, he had black hair when he was young. However, due to the influence of age and work, his hair has developed gray hairs which makes him look older. Regarding his work, he is a teacher who has many years of experience in teaching. That makes my father always strict with his students and also with me. But I'm not afraid of it, that rigor has changed me. When I was little until I graduated from high school, I was more playful than studying so my dad was always serious about my studies. Although he hit me many times, I think that it is necessary for me to study well. And the current results prove that I am currently studying at Hanoi University of Science and Technology. With my father's teacher salary every month, it's probably not enough compared to my tuition but my dad takes great care of me and always saves enough money for me to go to school. But unfortunately, he had a stroke a few months ago. I was extremely worried about my father. Fortunately, my father's health is better now. I love my dad so much because he is the one who changed and influenced my life.
From the time I
was born
until
now
,
many
events
have happened in my life and there are
many
people
I have met.
But
I
must
say that the most
important
person in my life is none other than my
father
. My
father
is
currently
a middle-aged
man
.
Before
, he had black hair when he was young.
However
, due to the influence of age and work, his hair has developed gray hairs which
makes
him look older. Regarding his work, he is a teacher who has
many
years of experience in teaching. That
makes
my
father
always strict with his students and
also
with me.
But
I'm not afraid of it, that rigor has
changed
me. When I was
little
until I graduated from high school, I was more playful than studying
so
my dad was always serious about my studies. Although he hit me
many
times, I
think
that it is necessary for me to study well. And the
current
results prove that I am
currently
studying at Hanoi University of Science and Technology. With my father's teacher salary every month, it's
probably
not
enough
compared to my tuition
but
my dad takes great care of me and always saves
enough
money for me to go to school.
But
unfortunately, he had a stroke a few months ago. I was
extremely
worried about my
father
.
Fortunately
, my father's health is better
now
. I
love
my dad
so
much
because
he is the one who
changed
and influenced my life.
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IELTS essay talking about your father

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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