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talking about a kind of volunteer work your friends and you usually do to help people

talking about a kind of volunteer work your friends and you usually do to help people rGOkl

Each year, at the 27/7 - War Invalids and Martyr's day. My secondary school usually ogannize an voluntary activities for students to visit and take care of soldier and martyrs who influenced by wars. During the day, we will go to theirs house, giving present and taking care of their health. Moreover, we can do anything to help them, such as cooking a great meal, fix the house or even weeding. Sometime they tell us many interesting stories about the war, we are so excited to hear and admire about their bravety. After journey, we are so happy because we can empathzie and help them to overcome difficulties. This is a meaningful activity, it is make us understand and grateful for what they have done. I am very proud of them

Each year, at the 27/7 Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 War Invalids and Martyr's day. My secondary school usually
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ogannize
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activities
 for students to visit and take care of soldier and martyrs who influenced by wars. During the day, we will go to theirs This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, giving present and taking care of their health. Moreover
, we can do anything to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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fix
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 or even weeding. Sometime they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
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many
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so
 excited to hear and admire about their Possible spelling mistake found.braverybravely
bravety
. After journey, we are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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because
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empathzie
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them to overcome difficulties. This is a meaningful activity, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 us understand and grateful for what they have done. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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them