Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people think that in Ancient time people may Utilise their time by doing different type of activities as compare to today to what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people think that in Ancient time people may Utilise their time by doing different type of activities as compare to today q0ODd
In this cutting-edge era, life is full of stress and strain. Nowadays, mostly people utilise their leisure time with the help of electronic gadgets Wells some people argue that in the Asian time, people made better use of their free time instead of today. I disagree with the statement. In the forthcoming paragraphs I will I lose you date my views before reaching an appropriate conclusion. To embark with, due to the advancement of technology play Thora of gadgets are obtainable for every age group. Momentarily, mostly in visual regale their mind by many doing many activities such as personal which may develop the skill as well as activate the humans brain. In recent time, every person do their work just because to change the economic condition. As a result the mostly, due to the advancement of technology play Thora of gadgets are obtainable for every age group. Momentarily, mostly in visual regale their mind by many doing many activities such as puzzle which may develop the skill as well as activate the human brain. In recent time, every person do their work just because to change the economic condition. As a result the mostly Pro creators are engaged in work then for relaxation of mind, They give preference to watch movies and spend leisure time activities activities. To cite an example in 12 countries such as Canada England and many more the people of old generation do not have enough time to spend because they are tired and they do not have any capacity of for doing job. Therefore, the electronic gadgets are the best way to utilise their time. Moreover in this Eire play Thora of opportunities are available for each and every age groups such as health Centre in which people can go just because to become mentally fit hands, in present time people may spend it free time more better as compare On the contrary, in the Asian time mostly in which were utilised a time with family moreover they also give more preference to do their work by using their hands. As a result this is the way to spend leisure time. However, in past year, new gadgets for available therefore at the time people spend the time with your family. And part-time individual did there all work activate Le as well as properly most in which were interested in history and they studied hard because they realise that no pain no gain To recapitulate, I personally believe that in present time any opportunities are available for each and every age groups
In this cutting-edge era, life is full of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
and strain. Nowadays,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mostly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
Possible spelling mistake. 'utilise' is British English.
utilise
their leisure
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of electronic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gadgets
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Wells
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
argue that in the Asian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
made better
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of their free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
instead
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
. I disagree with the statement. In the forthcoming paragraphs I will I lose you date my views
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
reaching an appropriate conclusion.

To embark with, due to the advancement of technology play
Possible spelling mistake found.
Thora
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gadgets
are obtainable for every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
.
Momentarily
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mostly
in visual regale their mind by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
doing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activities
such as personal which may develop the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
as activate the humans brain. In recent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, every person do their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the economic condition.
As a result
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mostly
, due to the advancement of technology play
Possible spelling mistake found.
Thora
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gadgets
are obtainable for every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
.
Momentarily
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mostly
in visual regale their mind by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
doing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activities
such as puzzle which may develop the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
as activate the human brain. In recent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, every person do their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the economic condition.
As a result
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mostly
Pro creators
are engaged
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
then for relaxation of mind, They give preference to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
movies and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spend
leisure
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activities
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activities
. To cite an example in 12 countries such as Canada England and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
generation do not have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they are
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
tired and
they do not have any capacity of for doing job.
Therefore
, the electronic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gadgets
are the best way to
Possible spelling mistake. 'utilise' is British English.
utilise
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Moreover
in this Eire play
Possible spelling mistake found.
Thora
of opportunities are available for each and every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
groups
such as health
Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.
Centre
in which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can go
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
to become mentally fit hands, in present
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
may
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spend
it free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
Use only "better" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more better
as compare

On the contrary
, in the Asian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mostly
in which were
Possible spelling mistake. 'utilised' is British English.
utilised
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
with family
moreover
they
also
give more preference to do their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
by using their hands.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
a result this is the way to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spend
leisure
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
However
, in past year, new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gadgets
for available
therefore
at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spend
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
with your family. And part-time individual did there all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
activate Le as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
as
properly
most in which
were interested
in
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
history and
they studied
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they
Possible spelling mistake. 'realise' is British English.
realise
that no pain no gain

To recapitulate, I
personally
believe that in present
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
any opportunities are available for each and every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
age
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
groups
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Some people think that in Ancient time people may Utilise their time by doing different type of activities as compare to today

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
426 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5band
    The two pictures illustrate the road that access to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010.
    The two pictures illustrate the road that access to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. Generally speaking, it is clear that public car park, circle road, and bus station have built, improving than before that the previous was made for empty land and small facilities such as a bus stop, while th...
  • 5.5band
    Fewer language causes easier life in the world. agree /disagree
    Now a days the number of languages totally changed every year various languages disappear. Some people believe it is not crucial point because people will have comfortable life, if there are fewer language in all of the word. First of all, fewer languages Causes accelerate change in people’s life s...
  • 5band
    Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck
    It is often argued that whether or not people achieve their objectives in life is mainly depends on their luck. While I accept that luck does have a role in being successful, I would argue that hard work is much more important to be succeed. On one hand, I agree that luck is important to be success...
  • 6.5band
    Nowadays, people have to face a number of ecosystem problems, and one of the biggest is global warming.
    Nowadays, people have to face a number of ecosystem problems, and one of the biggest is global warming. In particular, the purpose of this essay is to examine the causes of the threats to the environment and then suggest some feasible solutions. It is obvious that there are numerous primary factors...
  • 5band
    The Effects of Overeating
    Overeating affects weight gain and obesity, increases dangerous diseases, causes fatigue, drowsiness and loss of confidence. Firstly, overeating effected unwanted weight gain. When you eat more than what is required by the body, it leads to a condition where the body has to work more to digest the f...
  • 5band
    How cholesterol leads to heart disease.
    There are four steps that the cholesterol leads to heart disease. Firstly, Cholesterol it is fatty substance in our blood stream. It is happening because unhealthy eating habits and lack of exercise. The next step if it build up of fat in artery walls, they occur of narrowing of arteries. They have ...