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Yesterday, I had bad news about my new university. They said that, the lectures are going to be online, consequently, there will be no face-to-face lessons. As a result, I am definitely not going to apply, due to the fact that, the benefits of this kind of education are low, and the scholars cannot learn well. To resolve this issue, I am searching for new scholarships abroad especially in Europe. However, I have already found a number of scholarships like DAAD in Germany and Cheviening in the UK. What I ought to do know is to prepare applications carefully and not miss any opportunity. It sounds some how difficult.
Yesterday, I had
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bad
news about my new university. They said that, the lectures are going to be online,
consequently
, there will be no face-to-face lessons.
As a result
, I am definitely not going to apply, due to the fact that, the benefits of this kind of education are low, and the scholars cannot learn well. To resolve this issue, I am searching for new scholarships abroad
especially
in Europe.
However
, I have already found a number of scholarships like
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DAAD
in Germany and
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Cheviening
in the UK. What I ought to do know is to prepare applications
carefully
and not miss any opportunity. It sounds
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some how
difficult.
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IELTS essay talk about yourfuture plans

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109 words
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