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managing a team can be a very difficult job. In your opinion, what skills make a good boss ?

managing a team can be a very difficult job. In your opinion, what skills make a good boss? jdwBa
It is undeniably true that leading a team is indeed a very challenging and skills-required task. Therefore, a boss should possess various skills to conduct management properly. In my opinion, I would believe that there are two primary skills that a good(=successful) leader should have: the ability to organize tasks and connect members. To begin with, a skilled leader should know how to delegate and schedule different tasks. First of all, it helps to assign a relevant task to each member. Because an individual has a different forte(=unique skill set) that allows him or her to excel in a specific area, the work performance will increase considerably(=significantly). In addition, it enables a leader to map out a timeline to finish that assignment. If the process is conducted(=followed) methodically and scientifically, the work will be completed punctually without rushing or even procrastinating(1). Furthermore, a skilled (=competent) leader should understand the importance of the crucial connection among members of (2) a team. One reason is that it greatly(=subtantially) limits(=minimize) conflicts(=disputes) emerging out of several objective causes. With an obvious difference in viewpoints, it is inevitable that the team will experience difficulty with the inability to come to(=reach) a shared(=common) consensus. Another reason is that members will feel more comfortable assisting (3) others’ relating(=corresponding) jobs if they are well-coordinated. As a matter of fact, a typical task will consist of many sections that are closely connected (=interconnected). If they know how to support one another, the job will be more easily discussed, and thus bring(= result in) a satisfying(=gratifying) result. In conclusion, I would maintain that an accomplished leader should acquire the (4) two most important skills to administrate a group(5) well, including(6) delegating responsibilities (=duties) and establish vital connections between members to work more effectively.
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a
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skills
to conduct management
properly
. In my opinion, I would believe that there are two primary
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skills
that a
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good
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leader
should have: the ability to organize
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tasks
and connect members.

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begin
with, a skilled
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leader
should know how to delegate and schedule
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different
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tasks
.
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, it
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helps
to assign a relevant
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to each
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member
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Because
an individual has a
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different
forte(=unique
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skill
set) that
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allows
him or her to excel in a specific area, the work performance will increase
considerably
(=
significantly
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In addition
, it enables a
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leader
to map out a timeline to finish that assignment. If the process
is conducted
(=followed)
methodically
and
scientifically
, the work will
be completed
punctually
without rushing or even procrastinating(1).

Furthermore
, a skilled (=competent)
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leader
should understand the importance of the crucial connection among
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members
of (2) a team. One reason is that it
greatly
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subtantially
) limits(=minimize) conflicts(=disputes) emerging out of several objective causes. With an obvious difference in viewpoints, it is inevitable that the team will experience difficulty with the inability to
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come
to(=reach) a shared(=common) consensus. Another reason is that
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members
will feel more comfortable assisting (3) others’ relating(=corresponding) jobs if they are well-coordinated. As a matter of fact, a typical
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task
will consist of
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many
sections that are
closely
connected (=interconnected). If they know how to support one another, the job will be more
easily
discussed, and
thus
bring(= result in) a satisfying(=gratifying) result.

In conclusion
, I would maintain that an accomplished
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leader
should acquire the (4) two most
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important
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skills
to administrate a group(5) well, including(6) delegating responsibilities (=duties) and establish vital connections between
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members
to work more
effectively
.
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