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Learners dependence on technology

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Learners are becoming ever more dependent on technology, such as the Internet and mobile devices. This essay believes the main problems associated with dependence on computers is the lack of original thought and copying original work from others and suggests critical thinking classes and writing analysis software as the most viable solutions. The principal problems with over-reliance on technology are people not being able to think for themselves and plagiarism. With access to so much information, students often rely on other people’s opinions instead of forming their own. As well as this, they often use search engines to answer a question and simply copy the text from a website, rather than thinking about the question. This practice is not only prohibited in schools and universities but also stunts a student’s intellectual development because they will never truly think for themselves, which is what university is supposed to really be for. For example, many teachers complain that students copy web pages straight from Wikipedia word for word rather than giving a reasoned answer to their questions. Solutions to these worrying problems are special classes to focus on critical thinking and teachers using anti-plagiarism software to detect copying. If teachers create situations where students have to infer meaning and express opinions based on a small amount of information, this will ensure that students have an opportunity to develop these skills. Also, if students know that their assignments are being checked for plagiarism, this will be enough to deter them from doing so. For instance, many universities already use this kind of software to scan course work for plagiarism and it could be extended to include all homework, by learners in both secondary and tertiary education. In conclusion, the main problems with overuse of technology in education are the lack of original thought and plagiarism and these can be solved through special classes that teach students analytical skills and the use of plagiarism detection software.
Learners are becoming ever more dependent on technology, such as the Internet and mobile devices. This essay believes the main
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problems
associated with dependence on computers is the lack of original
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thought
and copying original work from others and suggests critical thinking classes and writing analysis
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software
as the most viable solutions.

The principal
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problems
with over-reliance on technology are
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people
not being able to
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think
for themselves and
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plagiarism
. With access to
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so
much information,
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students
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often
rely on other
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people
’s opinions
instead
of forming their
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own
.
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as this, they
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often
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use
search engines to answer a question and
simply
copy the text from a website,
rather
than thinking about the question. This practice is not
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only
prohibited in schools and universities
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but
also
stunts a
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student’s
intellectual development
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because
they will never
truly
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think
for themselves, which is what university
is supposed
to
really
be for.
For example
,
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many
teachers complain that
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students
copy web pages straight from Wikipedia word for word
rather
than giving a reasoned answer to their questions.

Solutions to these worrying
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problems
are special classes to focus on critical thinking and teachers using anti-plagiarism
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software
to detect copying. If teachers create situations where
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students
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have to
infer meaning and express opinions based on a
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small
amount of information, this will ensure that
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students
have an opportunity to develop these
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skills
.
Also
, if
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students
know that their assignments are being
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checked
for
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plagiarism
, this will be
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enough
to deter them from doing
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so
.
For instance
,
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many
universities already
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use
this kind of
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software
to scan course work for
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plagiarism
and it could
be extended
to include all homework, by learners in both secondary and tertiary education.

In conclusion
, the main
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problems
with overuse of technology in education are the lack of original
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thought
and
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plagiarism
and these can
be solved
through special classes that teach
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students
analytical
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skills
and the
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use
of
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plagiarism
detection
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software
.
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IELTS essay Learners dependence on technology

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
322 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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