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It is better if the whole family bring up children besides parents

It is better if the whole family bring up children besides parents LwE8K
Andoubtedly, all people are known thay, upbringing of children stand the first rung of life. Some people consider that close relatives are responsible as parents. There are numerous possitives that whole closes breed kids without indifference. In spite of that parents play more important role to grow up their offbring with learnedness and modesty than others. Tere are a variety of reasons for liability of kinsmen for kids. All couples are employed to develop career and improve their life, consequently grandparents have to be more amenable to care for chilsren. Certainly, older people have many expriences in the all fields of life, particularly they are expert to look after thier grandchildren. Bisides that, they are always sociable with grandkids and also they are ready to spand time interesting with grandchild. In addition, gramps give all love to kids and never support serious punnishment for their mistakes. In dispite the above, parents should balance work and personal time. Also it would be right way that they look after for their offbrings with responsiblity. Moreover, if adults do not take into consideration for morals of kids, it would be cousing to create awide range negative effects. Since kids may get spoilt due to bring up of other closes. As aresult disobidience habbits increase of youngers. Thus wellsprings should not allow their offbrings to change behaviour from uneffectivle influence of others. In addition, it should also be noted, parents ought to control all tipes of life of thier juveniles, shuch as, increasing their knowlarge and their personal habbits. In conclution, providing not only financial side but also raising good behaviour of children is basic duty of all parents. Because younh generations decorate our life with their high knowlarges and good personal manners.
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, upbringing of children stand the
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people
consider that close relatives are responsible as
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parents
. There are numerous
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possitives
that whole closes breed
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kids
without indifference.
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that
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parents
play more
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important
role to grow up their
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offbring
with
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learnedness
and modesty than others.
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are a variety of reasons for liability of kinsmen for
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kids
. All couples
are employed
to develop career and
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improve
their
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life
,
consequently
grandparents
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have to
be more amenable to care for
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chilsren
.
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, older
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people
have
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many
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expriences
in the all fields of
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life
,
particularly
they are expert to look after
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thier
grandchildren.
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Bisides
that, they are always sociable with
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grandkids
and
also
they are ready to
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spand
time interesting with grandchild.
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,
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gramps
give all
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love
to
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kids
and never support serious
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punnishment
for their mistakes. In
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dispite
the above,
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parents
should balance work and personal time.
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Also
it would be
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right
way that they look after for their
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offbrings
with
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responsiblity
.
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, if adults do not take into consideration for morals of
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kids
, it would be
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cousing
to create
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range
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kids
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get
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spoilt
due to bring up of other closes.
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disobidience
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habbits
increase of
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their
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offbrings
to
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change
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behaviour
from
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uneffectivle
influence of others.
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also
be noted
,
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parents
ought to control all
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tipes
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of
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thier
juveniles,
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shuch
as, increasing their
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knowlarge
and their personal
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habbits
. In
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conclution
, providing not
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only
financial side
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but
also
raising
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good
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behaviour
of children is basic duty of all
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parents
.
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Because
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younh
generations decorate our
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life
with their high
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knowlarges
and
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good
personal manners.
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IELTS essay It is better if the whole family bring up children besides parents

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
289 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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