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factories and business industries

factories and business industries LwE5V
whether industries and businesses should be encouraged by governments to changing their locationthe number of factories and businesses took place in residential areas which they are not so far from people’s live; as a result, they were seriously harmful for citizens; the pollution which are produced by factories; it might be affect life-threatening health problems; companies and industries associated with sizeable sounds and noise; people under no circumstances could not have silence at their daily-life;
whether
industries and businesses should
be encouraged
by
governments
to
changing
their
locationthe
number of factories and businesses took place in residential areas which they are not
so
far from
people
’s
live
;
as a result
, they were
seriously
harmful for citizens; the pollution which
are produced
by factories; it might be affect life-threatening health problems;
companies
and industries associated with sizeable sounds and noise;
people
under no circumstances could not have silence at their daily-life;
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IELTS essay factories and business industries

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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