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Talk about your neighbours

Talk about your neighbours APxan
The neighbours play a important role in our life. the good neighbours create a good memories and they life makes the Golden, they are the sources of happiness and joy. the neighbours of bad make a life of full of destroyes. the one of only neighbours they are part of happiness and sorrow. our House is situated with two houses of neighbours. they all are very good nature with a kind hearted. they aLwaYs help in the all moment. im front of my house is larger amount of house.
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important
role in our life.
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good
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neighbours
create a
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good
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memories and
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they life
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makes
the Golden, they are the sources of happiness and joy.
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neighbours
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bad
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make
a life of full of
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destroyes
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neighbours
they are part of happiness and sorrow.
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our
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House
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houses
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neighbours
.
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they
all are
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very
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good
nature with a
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kind hearted
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they
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aLwaYs
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help
in the all moment.
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front of my
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IELTS essay Talk about your neighbours

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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