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Talk about your last weekend

Talk about your last weekend 3bke5
I was absent from class on Saturday. I stay at home to rest and pursue my interests. I like to watch movies and listen to music. I prepare my own lunch. I finish my homework in the afternoon. My mother and I prepare dinner in the evening, and my entire family eats together. After that, we watched TV together, and before going to bed, I did some light yoga to help me fall asleep. My mother and sisters shared the housework on Sunday mornings. In the afternoon I went out with my friend in the afternoon and we went to a little cafe to discuss. My mother cooked my favorite dish, braised pork, in the evening, and we had a wonderful dinner. I'm quite pleased with my weekend. After a week of studying, I can relax with a weekend supper with my family. I love the weekend.
I was absent from
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
on Saturday. I stay at home to rest and pursue my interests.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
like to
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watch
movies and listen to music.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
prepare my
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own
lunch.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
finish my homework in the afternoon. My mother and I prepare dinner in the evening, and my entire family eats together. After that, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
TV together, and
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before
going to bed, I did
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
light yoga to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me fall asleep. My mother and sisters shared the housework on Sunday mornings. In the afternoon I went out with my friend in the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
afternoon and
we went to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
to discuss. My mother cooked my favorite dish, braised pork, in the evening, and we had a wonderful dinner. I'm quite
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
with my weekend. After a week of studying, I can relax with a weekend supper with my family. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
the weekend.

IELTS essay Talk about your last weekend

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
147 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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