Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

about a city in Vietnam that you would like to visit one day.

about a city in Vietnam that you would like to visit one day. 73Bn5
In Vietnam, there are many cities that I want to visit. But, my favorite city is Ho Chi Minh City. It is located in the South of Vietnam and was discovered about 300 years ago under the Nguyen Lords. The city with the first interesting thing is Ho Chi Minh City, the most populous place in Vietnam with more than 8 million Vietnamese. Secondly, the city has a variety of foods and drinks such as bread, broken rice, etc. In addition, Ho Chi Minh City is extremely dynamic and has many entertainment services such as cinemas, shopmalls, resorts. , city center, green space. But the atmosphere, water, sound. . here are very polluted and a lot of social evils. In short, Ho Chi Minh city is still a great tourist destination that I always want to visit
In Vietnam, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
that I want to visit.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, my favorite city is Ho Chi Minh City. It
is located
in the South of Vietnam and
was discovered
about 300 years ago under the Nguyen Lords. The city with the
first
interesting thing is Ho Chi Minh City, the most populous place in Vietnam with more than 8 million Vietnamese.
Secondly
, the city has a variety of foods and drinks such as bread, broken rice, etc.
In addition
, Ho Chi Minh City is
extremely
dynamic and has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
entertainment services such as cinemas,
Possible spelling mistake found.
shopmalls
, resorts.
Loose punctuation mark.
,
city center, green space.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
the atmosphere, water, sound.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
here
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
polluted and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
social evils. In short,
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
Ho Chi Minh city
is
still
a great tourist destination that I always want to
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
visit
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay about a city in Vietnam that you would like to visit one day.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
136 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    film club more attractive for teens
    From: Eliza Dough To: Tom Smith Subject: Film club improvements Date: 22. 10. 2021 Purpose The aim of this report is to give suggestions on how the Film Club can attract more students/teenage members. Raise Awareness To begin, I would like to point out that nowadays movies are mostly popular throug...
  • 6band
    Some part of society says that the major issue of our time is the decrease regarding specific species of plants and animals from nature. The rest of the others say that numerous environmental problems should be concerned.
    Some part of society says that the major issue of our time is the decrease regarding specific species of plants and animals from nature. The rest of the others say that numerous environmental problems should be concerned. In earlier decades, there used to be plenty of plants and animals but now the...
  • 6band
    online learning vs classroom learning
    Under the outbreak of Covid 19 pandemic, the world has witnessed major changes in several aspects of life, including education. Pupils are now required to study online at home so as to avoid mass gathering, which can consequently result in the spread of coronavirus. While the present and traditional...
  • 5band
    the house/flat where you live now
    There are many things I enjoy and would want to have. However, I like a little dog. I used to enjoy it as a kid. If it's feasible, I'd want my parents to get me a present for my birthday. When I was younger, I saw that a friend of mine had a very lovely small puppy. I've always desired to have a dog...
  • 6band
    Fast food restaurants have negative effects on eating habits and health.
    Personally, I tend to believe that fast food restaurants make people have a big impact for their health and behavior. However, several people said that fast food restaurants are not necessarily bad for their eating habits. There are two reasons why I totally agree, if fast food restaurants make peop...
  • 5band
    about a gift you have received from your parents.
    My parents have given me many gifts, but my favorite gift is a laptop. I was given that gift by my parents when I was 16 years old. It's a Dell vostro i5 3000 laptop. This laptop is available in black color. I don't know the price of the laptop as it was a gift but it has been priceless for me. This...