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Talk about your hobbies and your free time

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I dont know what should i write. this topic is so boring I would like to talk about hobby. i have different hobbies and i'm going to talk about all of them I like to go out and see my firends. i like shop and go to doctor. i like to eat and sleep. how much else should i write about this fucking isdue. realky are you kiding with me yes i'm old but i dont wanna die is that hard ro ubderestand it I got tired of talking about my hobbies and just go away Yours sincerly Sara
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boring I would like to talk about hobby.
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have
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different
hobbies and
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i'm
going to talk about all of
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them


I like to go out and
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my
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firends
.
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i
like shop and go to doctor.
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i
like to eat and sleep.
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how
much else should
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i
write about this
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fucking
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isdue
.
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realky
are you
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kiding
with me yes
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i'm
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old
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but
i
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dont
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wanna
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die
is that
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hard
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ro
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ubderestand
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it


I
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got
tired of talking about my hobbies and
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just
go
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away


Yours
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sincerly


Sara

IELTS essay Talk about your hobbies and your free time

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
98 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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