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have very little leisure time

have very little leisure time XEKRE

Today, people work long hours and have too many responsibilities: as a result, they have very little leisure time. If people spent more time with family and friends. they will be happier. Often parents do not have enough time to spend with their children. Therefore, young children do not receive the parental attention they need. If parents have more home time, they could play games with their children, and participate in more school activities. If parents spend more time with their children, children would do better in school. Furthermore, if workers had more leisure time, they can go on more family vacations. Teenagers would have more time to communicate with their parents if they did not have so many responsibilities. If leisure time increase, the family unit would be stronger and society as a whole would benefit

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